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  • Heartofthedark
    Veteran
    • Jul 2006
    • 5931

    #151
    Lovely - Damien cut him up to peices and burned him.. That didn't stop him

    Kicked him? LOL! After what Damien did I find it hard to believe that did any damage

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    • LovelyUndeadVam
      Red-Eyed Wonder
      • Jul 2008
      • 1469

      #152
      well. he's dead. Courtney killed him. somehow. what were you confused on before? you all told me you were confused but never told me what about.
      GH Family (possibly the coolest )
      Brother: ~GH Dog~
      Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
      (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
      Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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      • Heartofthedark
        Veteran
        • Jul 2006
        • 5931

        #153
        Lovely - Eh i'm not so confused anymore *Waits for confirmation on a second book or that the last chapter was the end for sure*

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        • LovelyUndeadVam
          Red-Eyed Wonder
          • Jul 2008
          • 1469

          #154
          i might have a second book. i dunno. that chapter was definently the end.
          GH Family (possibly the coolest )
          Brother: ~GH Dog~
          Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
          (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
          Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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          • someguy

            #155
            Read a few more chapters in.
            It's pretty cool.

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            • LovelyUndeadVam
              Red-Eyed Wonder
              • Jul 2008
              • 1469

              #156
              Thank you. i appreciate it, someguy.

              EDIT: i wonder what i'm going to do now that i have no novel to write.
              GH Family (possibly the coolest )
              Brother: ~GH Dog~
              Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
              (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
              Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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              • Justeazy
                Too Powerful!!!
                • Jul 2008
                • 2542

                #157
                GET IT PUBLISHED!!!

                Hmmm... I think it could have used a few more chapters... felt kinda like you rushed things there at the end...

                HMMM... loved it tho!!!
                I still wanna know what's the deal with the daylight walking...
                READ
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                Post anything and everything about Short Circuit HERE!

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                • LovelyUndeadVam
                  Red-Eyed Wonder
                  • Jul 2008
                  • 1469

                  #158
                  hahaha. what were you confused on earlier?
                  GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                  Brother: ~GH Dog~
                  Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                  (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                  Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                  • someguy

                    #159
                    You don't go to your forums anymore JE

                    I gotta go. bye.

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                    • LovelyUndeadVam
                      Red-Eyed Wonder
                      • Jul 2008
                      • 1469

                      #160
                      wow. i have almost nothing to do. cause i don't have my novel to write anymore. maybe i'll start another...
                      GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                      Brother: ~GH Dog~
                      Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                      (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                      Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                      • Heartofthedark
                        Veteran
                        • Jul 2006
                        • 5931

                        #161
                        Lovely - You could do a whole entirely new novel with new characters and such in a different thread

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                        • Justeazy
                          Too Powerful!!!
                          • Jul 2008
                          • 2542

                          #162
                          @Undead: I was confuzzed about:

                          1: What's the deal with the daylight walking...

                          2: Damien knew Courtney was Grants wife, why was he working with her for a while? (When she was controlling him, when he snapped outta it, he didn't remember what happened, but he knew everything that happened when he was working with Courtney)

                          3: Why, (it had been years since grant bit her, and he could track her easily) did he not ever show himself again until Damien was in the scene?

                          4: How did Rose's parents die?

                          5: Why/how does Rose know just how to defeat Grant/Courtney after just learning Grant's real name...

                          6: Will Rose ever visit "Bill" again like she said.

                          7: Is "Bill" Dracula??? And, if not, will they ever see him (since Damien said he is alive, and I took that to a meaning)
                          (If he is Dracula, I think the location should be somewhere different, *cough*Transylvania*cough*)

                          8: WHAT IS THE DEAL WITH THAT MYSTEROUS 5 MONTH COMA ENGAGING DISEASE???

                          9: How come noone wonders about their red eyes when they are talking to everyone? Everyone just seems to accept it as normal...

                          10: Does the world think nothing of these random attacks with victims being bitten on the neck commonly?

                          (have more, but let you rest with these at the moment)


                          @Someguy:
                          I go to both my forums everyday... THIS ONE I am more active at (Just got LOTS more smilies)
                          READ
                          >>CLICK>>sigpic<<CLICK<<
                          It'll SHOCK you!
                          Post anything and everything about Short Circuit HERE!

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                          • Heartofthedark
                            Veteran
                            • Jul 2006
                            • 5931

                            #163
                            Justeazy - In my opinion things are best left unanswered so you can imagine the answers for yourself

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                            • Justeazy
                              Too Powerful!!!
                              • Jul 2008
                              • 2542

                              #164
                              Hmmm... In that case, PUT THE ANSWERS (That you will give, I respect holding back details) IN A SPOILER THAT SAYS "Do Not Read: Heartofthedark"

                              I like to get the in depth details of stories I like... and, as you can tell, I like this story,
                              READ
                              >>CLICK>>sigpic<<CLICK<<
                              It'll SHOCK you!
                              Post anything and everything about Short Circuit HERE!

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                              • Heartofthedark
                                Veteran
                                • Jul 2006
                                • 5931

                                #165
                                That's not what I was intending

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