Help me please!

[Justeazy]

IDK, I just submitted my book thread, waiting for it to get submitted (It's called Short Circuit)

Hmmm... what would the third book be, through Courtney's eyes???

[LovelyUndeadVam]

hahaha. no back to rose i would think. courtney's life is too long. don't you remember? she's like a thousand! hahahaha.

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - So when can we expect chapter 12

[Justeazy]

Okay, I caught up with it!
I like this version better!


Heart, while you're waiting, read my story!
(The link is in my sig)

[LovelyUndeadVam]

OMG i'm so sorry! hahaha. i fell asleep yesterday and didn't wake up until like six this morning! i'm really sorry that i can't stay though i have company visiting me from Ohio and i would like to spend as much time with her as possible. i think i will have chapter 12 later tonight.

SORRY!

~Lovely

[Heartofthedark]

Darn! Guess I will have to wait

[someguy]

I madez a story too.
Not as great. I can't compare to this. But it helps with the wait.

[LovelyUndeadVam]

i be back! haha. my best friend left now, so i'm going to work on chapter 12. i may not do chapter 13 though, i'm so TIRED (even though i got 14 hours of sleep yesterday ). but i will definently try to get this done.

[Justeazy]

*goes and checks*

Awwww, it is still not up yet,

[LovelyUndeadVam]

it's there. and it's the MOST interesting one! i'm sure you all wanted to know what Damien was feeling that night in Rose's room when he almost killed her. so. there you go.

[Justeazy]

Hmmm...
that one is good too!

Near the end, it says "... Y thirst needed to be ..."
Is that supposed to be "... My thirst needed to be ..."?

[LovelyUndeadVam]

yeah, i tried to fix it. i also notice the font change at one point. :/ but it's okay. i will fix it right now. by the way, read Sherell's story. it's really really good. just don't ask me to do a comparison cause i'll lose.

EDIT: just realized i still need a last name (or does the switching off thing sound good??) for Damien AND a title for my second book. hmmmmm.

[Heartofthedark]

"I'M GETTING THERE, HOLD YOUR HORSES! haha. I'm jk."

[LovelyUndeadVam]

hahaha. just thought i would change it up a bit. "In progress..." just got boring.

[Justeazy]

What do you mean by "I'll lose" like yours is worse???
Well, don't say that, kuz yours is REALLY good, plus mine may screw up, as that is just the beginning

Well, thx for reading that, and the compliments. You should read multiple parts (4 people, and the "Zombie History" part too) and then make your oponion, because the story isn't complete without all parts!

Lol, I noticed the font thing too. It was right when the scene changed, so I thought it was for some subtle effect tho.


PS, PM: an idea,