Help me please!

[Justeazy]

GREAT! I like this a lot better! It seems like a LOT LESS RUSHED!


PS, why would I tast good with KATSUP?

[LovelyUndeadVam]

uhmm. katsup?

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Yay you took my advice

[LovelyUndeadVam]

yeah. thank you for that! i'm going to have to mention so many people in my special thanks!

[Justeazy]

Another way to spell ketchup, lol


Hmmm... which advice???

WAIT: Lemme guess... all vampires have special powers?
Courtney: Control
Grant: Immobilization
Damien: Sense others pain?
Rose: Speed?

[LovelyUndeadVam]

ohhh...okay. i don't know why. MAYBE dragons like ketchup.

Heart suggested that i explain the five months better. so i did.

[Justeazy]

Ooh, good, kuz I was asking for that too, YAY!
(I've been asking that since ROSE's book about that, lol)

[LovelyUndeadVam]

HA HA HA. okay i can go back and edit that one too! hahahahaha! but that would have to be after this book, cause i can only do one thing at a time.

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - My suggestion is for you to post the next chapter ()

[LovelyUndeadVam]

HA. i so knew you were going to say that! soo let me just clarify. you are both guys correct? (not meaning to offend. just asking. CLARIFYING. )

[Justeazy]

Yep, at least, I'm A DUDE, lol...

No, you don't have to go edit that one, lol.
Rose was in coma, so she don't know what happened, and they all lied to her...

I also like the fact that you changed damien's sister from buriel to creamation...
It builds suspense from the "Vampire death by fire" suspense, lol

[LovelyUndeadVam]

well, just waiting for Heart to answer.

okay, good, i wasn't going to anyways.

i wasn't going for that. my REAL grandma Karen was creamated. so i just thought i would put that. R.I.P.

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Yes I am a guy
(Was making a game that's why it took forever )

[LovelyUndeadVam]

okay, going to start again. Heart, eazy, why do you like my novel so much?

just have to know.

[Heartofthedark]

Because I like vampire stories