Help me please!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

yess, i like you! you like my online buddy.

haha. and yeah, i probably will come up with a twist on the spot.

it's almost done! thank you for supporting me. i will try to get it published.

EDIT: i will post the rest.

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Glad to know i'm not the annoying person who keeps begging for more chapters

I don't doubt it

I hope you do!!!

YAY!!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

Heart-NAWWWW! i love that you like my book. encourages me.
i'm going to play pool for a minute. will be back soon.

[Justeazy]

WHAT ABOUT ME????
(Just got done reading the rest after getting home/homework)

Hmmm... Grant is DEAD, but Vampires have to be DEAD to become vampires... so I'm wondering If he'll come back as a SUPER VAMPIRE or something... (Note, you said dead, not "not coming back" )

I'm sure they will move back, as you said "I have a hard time writing in a place other than where I live" (or something like that)

Hmmm... Damien STILL doesn't have a last name... but I'm just thinking maybe he uses misc last names as covers, and that's what he'll do for the last name for the wedding for Roses parents... (Long story short, I cannot decide what will be good for him)

OMG, For the longest time (like 4/5 pages) I thougt Heart was GH1, lol.


***Saving each chaptes into a foldered document!


Looked back, skimmed it all, cannot remember what part I "squeeled" on,

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Okay Can't wait

Justeazy - Don't give her any ideas! I don't want Grant to go all super powered and kill Damien or Rose!!!

I like the misc name idea but remember that Rose's parents are dead

LOL! You were there when me and GH1 Switched!

I don't think you should do that, some would consider it stealing, some meaining certain vampires

[LovelyUndeadVam]

HAHAHA. you guys rock. but, omg, Justeazy, my AC in my house is broken! it's BLAZING in here!

and i don't care if you save it, but you just can't HAVE it. you know? no copying! copyrighted to Lovely.

ps, don't publish it either! i want to do that! lol.

Heart- don't worry, Rose and Damien won't die. do any of you remember COURTNEY?

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - I do!!!! ! Post the chapter so I can see what happens

[Justeazy]

Well, she said she explained it in the NEXT chapter... and I think Damien might be lying...
We don't know exactly yet...

YES Undead, post next chapter plz!!!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

OH i was going to do that huh?? oops. sorry. i'll post the next chapter in a few.

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Uhh... Was that a dream..? If not it was kinda rushed ^.^" anyways I am still very confused I don't actually know what's going on at this point in the story but oh well I will continue waiting and reading hoping I get it

[Heartofthedark]

Ehehe Getting exciting again

[LovelyUndeadVam]

ughh, i'm glad you think soo. in my opinion it's turning into incomprehensible mush. it's so hot in my house that my brain is frying.

[Heartofthedark]

Well in my opinion to make it interesting do a chapter on Rose and Damien hunting

[LovelyUndeadVam]

haha. i was already planning that.

[Justeazy]

OMG, i almost squeeled then again...
(I think this is somehow still not real, or he is hoping since "Vampire memories are great, but human memories are lacking" that she will forget about that not-so-nice moment... or something, )

PS, that last post was BEFORE I saw the chapter above it, (This one is right after 24)


OMG... I think we need a little more stuffs in there...

Was that part... "We must leave now"
It said "He dragged him"... WHAT??? Is it supposed to mean Damien dragged himself (kuz he is the only he/him in the room)