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    Ok this is where u can post poems,rate them,nd give advice for them.anyone can post,but please keep them rule safe If u feel offended by a comment about ur poem,plz report it or otherwise just ignore the comment Have fun.I'll start

    As I sit here wondering,this pain peirces my heart.As this pain grows my heart weakens.It's like I can't win for loseing.All these things swarm in my head and I can't seem to distract myself.All I think is when will this pain stop,when will this suffering end.Why do I fught when I don't want to.Why do I shut them out?Why do I hate them?Why do they treat me like this,just as I trust them they give me another reason to hate them.Why do I get shoved aside and beaten down,like an animal in captivity.My heart aches every day,longing for forgiving love,and acceptance.Can I please stand up without being kicked down over and over?Forced off the edge.But no one cares.Trying to hold on,but now one see's how broken we are inside.No-one trys.As I see my life crumble before my eyes.I cry in pain and dispare.I just don't get heard.I lye here in scilence,as I slowly fade away.


    plz note:"I was going through a ruff time,so plz don't be too hard on me "
    2~28~10 <3

  • #2
    wow. that was REALLY good, emo. reminds me of what i like to write about in my poems.
    GH Family (possibly the coolest )
    Brother: ~GH Dog~
    Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
    (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
    Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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    • #3
      Thnx alot,I was wondering what kind of feedback I would get,lol. Thnx again

      Well if u want post them here I would love to read them!!!!!!!!
      2~28~10 <3

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      • #4
        ohh, i have one.

        The tears of blood flow heavily,
        and I can't breathe.
        Get off my chest,
        I'm not going to be who you want.
        I'll wear my dark clothes,
        just to get at you.
        I'll put on black make-up,
        just to see your sneer.
        Do you think you own me?
        FYI, I own my soul,
        not you.
        Get off my chest.
        Breathe.
        Breathe.
        My life is my own,
        I make it what I want,
        and you can't be there to run it,
        because I am my own person.
        A rebel.
        Don't like it?
        Get a life.
        GH Family (possibly the coolest )
        Brother: ~GH Dog~
        Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
        (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
        Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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        • #5
          wow that is really good too.I like how u stick it to whoever that was written about
          2~28~10 <3

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          • #6
            it was written to all the preppy people at my school that give me dirty looks. it's all because they think that i "cut myself".
            GH Family (possibly the coolest )
            Brother: ~GH Dog~
            Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
            (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
            Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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            • #7
              WOW you guys those were really good

              @emo- I love how you sort of sum up life
              @luv- I love how dark and slick it is
              @both- Really, really gud

              Here is mine

              In fear i tremble, i shake and shake. In fear i feast on everything that i shake about. It beats like a siren in the devils fear. The fears are coming. The fears are roaming all around the streets. Coming to get me, upon blissed fears. The fears i shake about are all coming, they're coming, and i am running away.
              New York!
              Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
              There's nothing you can’t do,

              Now you're in New York!
              These streets will make you feel brand new,
              These lights will inspire you,
              Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

              JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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              • #8
                ! that's amazing geordie!
                GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                Brother: ~GH Dog~
                Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                • #9
                  IS IT!? I have wrote loads better
                  New York!
                  Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
                  There's nothing you can’t do,

                  Now you're in New York!
                  These streets will make you feel brand new,
                  These lights will inspire you,
                  Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

                  JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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                  • #10
                    yes it is really good.U explain actions nd feelings very well I like it
                    2~28~10 <3

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                    • #11
                      I dont know guys, i think it isnt very good *false hope*
                      New York!
                      Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
                      There's nothing you can’t do,

                      Now you're in New York!
                      These streets will make you feel brand new,
                      These lights will inspire you,
                      Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

                      JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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                      • #12
                        That's what I thought about mine so don't worry bout it
                        2~28~10 <3

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                        • #13
                          OK thanks but i will post a better one
                          New York!
                          Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
                          There's nothing you can’t do,

                          Now you're in New York!
                          These streets will make you feel brand new,
                          These lights will inspire you,
                          Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

                          JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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                          • #14
                            yup me too,but l8er.I need to write some new ones too,cuz I only writ 2
                            2~28~10 <3

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                            • #15
                              if i could access all mine i would have about...twenty to thirty. yeah i had a really rough time in life and i wrote to make it better. not saying that everything is okay now, but it's getting better. i could probably write another one.
                              GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                              Brother: ~GH Dog~
                              Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                              (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                              Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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