Poems

[Justeazy]

FIRST off, I didn't read EVERY thing posted so far, but most all of what I DID read was good, so to all!

Well... this isn't really a poem, but a song.
I just didn't feel like making a new topic, since this one will do just fine!


This is a song I just wrote for certain reasons...

"
Got your first car,
know what you gotta do.
Show those other punks
that you got it too!
Win your first race,
win your next, win your last.
You win every race,
and you always have a blast!

You're a racer.
They'll put you to the test,
You're a racer.
but you'll show them you're the best!
Wallet's getting heavy
as you rise to the top.
Face is getting known
as the one they can't stop.
You're a racer.
Live your life by day,
You're a racer.
always come back to play!

Put it in drive
and count to three.
Step on the gas
and pick up speed.
Take a right around this corner,
left on the next one.
You beat all the rest,
'kuz you're number one!

You're a racer.
You're the best there'll ever be,
You're a racer.
they should call you speedy-magee!
Wallet's getting heavy
as you rise to the top.
Face is getting known
as the one they can't stop.
You're a racer.
Live your life by day,
You're a racer.
always come back to play!

Pick up the keys
and run out the door.
Not gonna stop
'til you win one more!
You've beaten them all,
it's just a game to you now.
Don't wanna stop
'til they stop saying "wow"

You're a racer.
You're the best there ever was,
You're a racer.
You're still all the buzz!
Wallet's getting heavy
as you rise to the top.
Face is getting known
as the one they can't stop.
You're a racer.
Live your life by day,
You're a racer.
always come back to play!

Tires don't spin,
but your name lives on.
Don't race anymore,
But your spirit's not gone.
Never lost a race,
and you never backed down.
But the time has finally come
for you to pass on your crown.

He's a racer.
Just starting in your game,
He's a racer.
But he'll live up to your name!
Wallet's getting heavy
as he rises to the top.
Face is getting known
as the one they can't stop.
He's a racer.
Lives his life by day,
He's a racer.
always come back to play!

(optional stanza)
After so long,
it's time to say good-bye.
As all good parents know,
you have to let your baby fly.
You've raised him well,
He'll go far, you will see.
He'll take your name
and make his own legacy!
"

This song is copyright (c) 2009 Justin Castillo; All Rights Reserved


Tell me what you think.

Also, should the name be "You're a racer" or "Pass on your crown"?

[Chocbubbles]

wow, that's really cool
looks like a good song

hmmm...i'd choose "pass on your crown" it sounds good to me

[binkygg]

i have a limerick i made in school

There was once a duchess from France
Who learned how to gracefully dance
She was good for a while,
But tripped on a tile
So she lost her gigantic chance!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

Hey everyone, I know it seems like I was gone for a while, but hey, here I am, with a poem!

Memories
I love my life as much as the next person.
I love my parents,
my friends,
all the happy times spent together.
Another time,
another place,
a memory not soon forgotten.
But as time goes on,
we unfortunately do forget,
even if we want to remember.
All the happy times spent together,
wasted on a memory.


It's kind of sad, but I wrote it for school.

[1momomo124]

good job Lovely! better then mine

[Emo234]

Ok so I have a poem I wrote.I guess u could say for valentines day.It's really corny do u all want to read it anyway??????


Let me know and I'll post or not post it

[Hitman]

Why wouldn't we want to read it Emo?
Personally, I'd love to!

[Lumpy Jay]

if its a valentines poem the cornier the better so lets hear it

[EscapeGirl]

Like Lumpy Jay says, for Valentine's Day, the cornier, the better. Please share it!

[Emo234]

Ok well glad u guys and girls want to read it.It's called butterflies.


Butterflies,Ah butterflies!
How I wish it never dies.
That sweet hypnotic sensation.
The pace at which my heart insist's on racin'
How I love it so.
Just to let the current flow
Oh to see you everyday.
I wish it were that way.
How is this rush possible?
Oh what am I saying it's UNSTOPPABLE!!!!!!
I hope you feel the same.
Or is it my heart just playing games.
Butterflies,Ah butterflies!



Hope u all like it

[Lumpy Jay]

Emo i think its great and NOT corny at all.

Happy Valentines everyone

[Emo234]

Oh thnx glad u liked it.

[ForeverJoseph]

as if the world stops turning everthing stops and i get to think i think of the people i think of the places i think of life and its ups ad downs ipick up the knife and stare i see me looking at myself. the disgusting image of me. but i put it down knowing the horrors of guilt. i cant do that to them.i walk a way wearing my fake smile.

i came up with that on a rainy day.


more will be coming soon.

[Clank]

Heres a one i just made up, to sum up my life in the past 4 days

Its Not what they say
Its the Laughing
Its the hardest sound to hear when your on the other side
Its like a siren that never stops spinning
Its like you have a pain in your body
So long my friend
Its harder than words to get through that noise
Its harder than a rock being aimed at you
Its harder than the toughest of toothaches
Its harder than your mind can take
Because you cant stop it
Its making your emotions grow
Its making you hide behind jovial fear
Its harder to realise that its happening to you
However its all my fault
Its why i don’t wanna fight it
Its why i don’t want to step out and grip
Because its harder that way to deal with it
Its Not what they do, Its what they mean
How does it end.

[EscapeGirl]

as if the world stops turning everthing stops and i get to think i think of the people i think of the places i think of life and its ups ad downs ipick up the knife and stare i see me looking at myself. the disgusting image of me. but i put it down knowing the horrors of guilt. i cant do that to them.i walk a way wearing my fake smile.

i came up with that on a rainy day.


more will be coming soon.

This is so sad. And worrisome. If you ever need to talk, please know I'm only a PM away, Party. Please, if you ever need to talk...just let me know. In the meantime, keep writing if it makes you feel better and helps get your feelings out. You're a nice guy, and I only hope to see happier poems to reflect a happier you in the future.

Heres a one i just made up, to sum up my life in the past 4 days

Its Not what they say
Its the Laughing
Its the hardest sound to hear when your on the other side
Its like a siren that never stops spinning
Its like you have a pain in your body
So long my friend
Its harder than words to get through that noise
Its harder than a rock being aimed at you
Its harder than the toughest of toothaches
Its harder than your mind can take
Because you cant stop it
Its making your emotions grow
Its making you hide behind jovial fear
Its harder to realise that its happening to you
However its all my fault
Its why i don’t wanna fight it
Its why i don’t want to step out and grip
Because its harder that way to deal with it
Its Not what they do, Its what they mean
How does it end.

Oh, Clank. The same goes for you, you know. If you need to vent, or get anything off your chest, you know how to reach me. I've been there, and I think there are many who know how you feel. I hope things look up for you. But that's a good poem. You're a cool guy. Keep that chin up.