Second book by LovelyUndeadVam

[LovelyUndeadVam]

Okay. firstly, hello everyone.

secondly, the first three chapters of my new book are up. http://thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

thirdly, corrections are seeked. if there is something that i can fix tell me.

fourthly (and most importantly):

THIS BOOK IS MOST DEFINITELY NOT SUITED FOR YOUNG READERS.

[Justeazy]

Gaah, chapter 2/3 just loaded but I gotta go...
Read rest when I get back,

[LovelyUndeadVam]

okey. thank you for that typo you PMed me. i fixed it.

EDIT
chapter four is up.

EDIT
five is now up.

[Clank]

Why have you made a new thread??

[LovelyUndeadVam]

well this is a thread for a different book. mistery accidentally thought that it was the blood parade. sorry for the confusion.

[~GH Dog~]

I had a dream that your books were at barns and nobels and every one was aroud them

It is sad i dont have time to read that book

[LovelyUndeadVam]

i wouldn't recommend that you read it e7. it has some really strong language in it and i don't want you to get in trouble. you are my little bro, after all.

[~GH Dog~]

fine

[LovelyUndeadVam]

aw i'm sorry. if there wasn't so much profanity in it i would say it's okay. cheer up.

[Isaiah]

we live through fowl lang. at my school
Fowl!!!!!!~!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

well, so do i, but that's because i'm in high school. i dunno, if you think you can handle it, go ahead. i'm just saying that i don't recommend it. doesn't mean it stops you. i'm just warning you.

[Isaiah]

Give me the page of a bad one and ill rate
Trust me! Ill show you

[LovelyUndeadVam]

http://thebloodparade.webs.com/secondseries.htm

it's all right there.

[Isaiah]

Oh, well do i have to read allllll that?

[LovelyUndeadVam]

well, if you want to rate the bad language. hahaha. you don't have to. it's just there for readers to enjoy.