Bullets, a new book from geordieboy

[Emo234]

Ok the first chapter was very good I like it so far.I already like it alot cuz it's a love story from what I get.(yay)




Edit:

Ok so chapter 2 was very good too.I like it alot.U really have me hooked.Ur going on my fav writer list I like ur style clank U have a good talent and a brilliant mind.


I got a lil confused about the knife tho where was it,in his back,her back,or the ground?????

[Clank]

The knife is in the haracters back and the character is now dead.

And i will switch the writing to third person And also it is a love, story, thriller