Talent Amass!!

[BeanMan3]

Here's a poem about my friends
I call it
FLOUR DAY:

Early in the morning
I'm wide awake
Today is the day
To bake a cake

I call my friends round
James and Sam
James has got the sugar
And the strawberry jam

We mix it up
Nice and thick
A knock at the door
In comes Nick!

We're happy he came
Even though he's late
The cake is ready
And it tastes great!

[Mistery]

Very nice poems, GTgirl and BeanMan
Thanks for sharing with us

[acasete]

My BEST comic strip ever:

[Lilliputt]

LOL! Thaz really sweet, Acasete

Ok, so this is a tribute to my dear favourite alien

Flying Been (!) Song

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
hoooooome agaaaaaaaaaiiiiin
crooooooooss the seeeeeeaaaaaa

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
stormy weeeeeeeaaaaaaathers
To a beeeeeen you,
are a beeeeeeeeeee

[acasete]

LOL! Thaz really sweet, Acasete

Ok, so this is a tribute to my dear favourite alien

Flying Been (!) Song

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
hoooooome agaaaaaaaaaiiiiin
crooooooooss the seeeeeeaaaaaa

Beeeeeeeeeens are flyyyyyyyyyyyying
stormy weeeeeeeaaaaaaathers
To a beeeeeen you,
are a beeeeeeeeeee

Thanks!
I think you puted too many letters on each word.
But it's ok!

[Lilliputt]

Thanks!
I think you puted too many letters on each word.
But it's ok!

No I didn't, Acasete, it is supposed to be that way. Also you kinda missunderstood. The tribute was meant for Mistery. Go look at three word story ta see why I have made it

[bige92]

A SONG I MADE UP JUST NOW

i wish the world was a better place,
were every1 didn't kill,
to all the kind ppl here,
who olny treat the ill,
if only this could come true,
& have a better world,
without out every1 on,
the ground all up in cruled

[bread]

A quickie prepeard...

LOL FAILURE R U
I R NOT FAIL
YOUR R FAIL
AND THERE IS NO FAILUE

lol disease lol disease
example is influenza
lol disease lol disease
i don not celebrate Quanzaa

ROFL YAY
ROFL YAY
ROFLING ALL THE WAY
ROFLING DAY

Edn of song
Edn of song
it was not
very long!

[GTgirl]

The Necklace and the Brother

This thread is only for GTgirl to post in.

Narrator: Some boy

I woke up from the yelling in Mark's room. "How terrible!" a voice said. "Where is it?!" another said. "I DON"T HAVE IT!" one said. I tiptoed to Mark's room and saw him crying, even if he's 18. Ma and Pa was holding a whip. They turned back and went back to my room. What just happened?

Ma and Pa was still angry. "What happened?" I whispered to my brother. "Shut up, it's none of your buisness, goofball." "You better find the silver necklace." Pa said to Mark. I dressed and got ready for school. Mark was in an afternoon school, so after I went home, he goes to school.

But this day was different. Usually Mark was in the car all set for him to go to college. I saw him laying on the floor, looking dead. "How could you?" I whimpered to Ma and Pa. "He deserved it." Pa said. A funeral was held, and everyone dressed in black. Meme, the babysitter, dressed casually in her gray dress. Ma and Pa looked at her neck, and cried in guiltness. I saw the necklace properly put on Meme's neck. Losing a brother is the sad thing, but parents as murderers is worse. "We're so sorry, Mark!" Ma said. "Sorry isn't enough. A life is what he needs!" I shouted. "You close your mouth!" Pa commanded. "A necklace is more important than a son? What kind of parents are you?" I said. Then with a blank face, I stood and walked home.

Every Christmas I visited Mark. One particular night, a note on his grave said, "You are the bravest brother I've seen."

This is not real ok!

[GTgirl]

Spring time

The wintery skies are turning blue,
And the roses also grew,
Spring is almost near,
And it's almost here.

The hibernating bear,
And her cubs she care,
Wakes up in the morning light,
The groundhog thinks the spring is here, all right.

The gentle breeze is blowing,
The flowers are growing,
Such a beautiful season,
To have a reason....

For loving you.

[mojotolo]

i know ppl havn't posted on ere 4 a while, but i'll get things moveing agian for all my fav loonies!!!

i like writing songs (proper long songs) mostly because i love to sing and dance (no balla rubbish though, srry to upset n e one but i find it slopey, even though i love singing love songs)

CRAZY

[Guitar]

Bridge : Why did you leave me?
When will you be back?
Are yo-oh gone for long?


You slid lost controll through a row,
You hid your shadow gone now!
Every time I buy your moaning grit,
You take my life and through it to bits,
It's not fair, why do I try?
All you got inside ya' is lie!

[Guitar]

Chorus: This CRAZY world in,
Which I live. (waa-ooh)
Baby!


(Waa-ooh, waa-ooh-ooh)
I'm lost i'm scared.
I'm crazy can't bare-it.
With out-you, Baby!
My life feels like a million dollers,
Thrown AWAY!
Some day,
You will (know-oh)

Chorus

Bridge

[Guitar]

Chorus

gone



hope you liked it!!!


together
i woke up in the mildle of the night,
confused,
where were you?
i dunno but i still dreamt.

Chorus: of you and me together.
in our own world forever.

Bridge: and now look at where we are,
together not far apart.

i still beleved
Chorus

Bridge



still in progres that one, but what'ya think?

i also have writen parts of songs:

(doesn't yet have a name, thinking of one- in progress!!)

i can't deal with this anymore,
i can't concentrate.
your loves like fish on a bait,
nothin ever goes my way.

oh no nothin can go nice in my life,
not even once,
can anything go right.

Chorus: how can i be oridinal?
When every one's copyin me.
How can i be individual?
When everyone's watchin me

[SamWyatt]

Here's my tribute to GH. Hope you like it.

I wish there was a special place
Where I could just be me,
Have loads of fun with everyone,
And make a friend or three!

I need to find a safe place
That I can call my home,
With fun to have, games to play,
And friends to call my own.

Perhaps, I thought, just one day
I'd find the perfect place,
Where people would be friends with me,
That really would be ace!

I'd love to find that somewhere,
Where people laugh and chat
About things they know, games they've played
And pics of this and that.

Then one day I came across
A site that sounded good.
That's how I found my special place,
It's name is Gamershood!!

I hope you like my poem
(Although rhyming's not my art!)
But let me please just tell you all
It's written from the heart.

[Elni]

I think this is gr8 idea to share the talents fo each ppl. Nice work and poems. I my self like to write novels and stories. I had written 2 when I was 12 and now I am writting my biggest novel. The first 2 was:

"Rock's treasure" where 3 children find a secrete map at their toys, and desided to find. One of their cousine wants to follow them and spoil their plans. At the end the three kids find the treasure. It was a book that Rock had wrote sencuries ago, when he was on he pirate ship, and his only wish was for ppl to read this book.
The other one was "The magical Forest" where agen two brothers and a sister was orphans and the only place to find food was at a magical forest, where a bad wizzard had made everything magic. No one had came out of that forsest. But it was their only solution....At the end they found the magician and become friends.
I want to believe that my best novel will be the last one I write: "The diary of love". A girl find a diary at their basement, which belong to her grant mother, and it describes her life when she was a kid, her best friend which was a boy, the years at uni, who she and her best friend become married, and the magical moment (which I think is also sad) the way this novel will finish is when at the last paragraph sais "Dear diary...I am still in bed, but I am not afraid anymore..I am going to see my lovely hasbund again, and we'll be to gether one more time...." and there is like a line at the end as she didn't finish the paragraph...

[Jcatzl101]

Little shop

A little broken shop, down on the hills,
covered with paper and mail and bills,
the door had a crack,
the windows were black,
light can't seap through,
dark hearted and blue,
gum on the sides,
broken carnival rides,
trash on the steet,
mice at your feet,
nibblin' on crumbs
and to that it all sums.
mind in a hole,
not one soul.

alone...
in the little broken shop...

[Jcatzl101]

Earth as we know it...

How sad it is to see,
how the world has come to be.
Once peaceful for years,
have turned into tears,
and it all is our fault,
joy is to our halt.

we are to blame,
we have our shame,
some worse than others,
and to one another.
We have, yet, to see,
how the world can truely be.
peaceful and happy and joyful and free.

yet it will get worse,
we've been under a curse,
for much too long,
and it's still growing strong.
We will see our day,
when we have no more time to stay,
but remember one thing,
together we will sing:

"joy is lifted into heaven above,
with its kindness, caring and love,
we will see it again so long as we,
come to look at earth and see what we see."

Jcatzl101