Talent Amass!!

[Jcatzl101]

beautiful

[EscapeGirl]

thank you dear cuz. i wanna hear one of YOUR poems. i want proof that my online cuz has talent!

Hehe. I haven't written poems for ages. I prefer acting. If I come across one of my old poems, I'll post it. Deal?

[jenni.p123]

Winter is nearing
I feel it in the air
the trees all ageing
whilst im sitting in my chair

The first speack of snow
it's all very exciting
the temperature reaches zero
everyone is uniting


(ahh i have to go, i may continue this later )

[Lilliputt]

Oh... Robert Burns is shakin' da poetry tree I like!!

[jenni.p123]

yeah i shook it

[Elni]

We still waiting for the rest of your poem jenni

WHY??? by me

Why I wonder
you act that way
why so shy, so angry and hate
why you gave your smile away?

Why when I cry
you turn your back to me
why when you cry
I hug you as you never did?

Why when some good
to my side is spent
why so jealous of me my friend?

Why when good
is visit you I smile
When it happened to me
why you cry?

Why you ignore me
like I don't exist
Why don't you call me
why do you resist?

Why when your friends whisper:
"Tell her to leave.
We don't want her here can't you see??

She is nothing but trouble
look at her face
Tell that clown:
go away to another place"

Why you are with them
as you have a bad day
Why you listen to them anyway????

I want to ask you one
thing and only
Why you actually feel so lonely?

Why when people suffer
I don't feel that much
Why when you died
my heart was bust?

Where are you "friends" ???
Don't tell me away.
Why I couldn't protect you
from that doomed day?

[EscapeGirl]

@Jenni...I like! I hope you continue it soon.

@ Elni...OMB! That's so sad... Very expressive. I liked it.

[Elni]

I am glad u liked it dear Escape . I had a very strange inspiration that day. I was working and suddenly some of those lines jump in to my head. I try something happier next time

[Lilliputt]

There is a room, cold and damp, nearly all forgotten
where harsh words once were very cruelly spoken
Within this place the dirty floor is mouldy oaken
and here lies the pieces of what had then been woken
ripped apart thrown around until roughly crushed and broken
So find them all
around the hall
shreds of what once had been
but never will it stand again proudly as a token
or ever again be seen

[EscapeGirl]

That is an absolutely beautiful poem, my dear mother. So well written and touching. You've got such an amazing talent.

[Iva]

It's sad and dark, but very beautiful! Proof that you can write english poems after all

[Mcakkay]

they are small because I took them with my cell phone

[EscapeGirl]

They're beautiful, Mcakkay!! Are you planning on doing photography when you're older as a career? They're very pretty!

[Mcakkay]

I would love to..but I doubt it...I don't know how I would go about it.

[EscapeGirl]

If you choose to go to college, you can take it as a minor, instead of a majot (that's how it works here in the states, anyway). And you could major in something else....Hmm....Or you could submit your art to newspapers for now. Just for fun.