Pivot

[Mistery]

Have you saved it as .gif?
Then you should be able to upload it to Imageshack or photobucket.com.

However, you cannot upload here on this forums, just post a link to it

[tarumi]

thanks .. i hope this works.. tho on the site it goes reely slow

http://img293.imageshack.us/my.php?image=shortlifeofcrazedduckqd8.gif

i think thats the link?? not sure

[Mistery]

Yes, it is
Lol, good job

[tarumi]

lol thanks... i dnt know if its just my comp but it runs really slowly .. shame =] but im glad i finally got it up =]

[someguy]

bige: try a slower frame rate on the flips. Don't make it extremely slow unless you want slo-mo kind of thing. But It skips, and thats not good.
And work on the landing.

[cant touch this]

http://img254.imageshack.us/my.php?i...dvsbluemp6.gif

Red Vs. Blue 1

Im going to start making a Red Vs. Blue 2 soon, so that will be up

Thanks for posting this!
Great animations, guys!

[someguy]

ummm...yeah.
Well, it's all choppy. The physics are unreallistic, you need to make your own sticks. The movements are bad, and the camera is stiff.
Not bad if this is your first.

[Mistery]

Someguy, I think it would be better to give some constructive feedback instead of listing what is bad in your opinion.
Constructive feedback contains ideas how to make it better, shows up things/methods for improvement etc. - this would help people much more, and would sound less rude.
Thanks

[someguy]

I'm not trying to sound rude.
I've been in flash and pivot a while, and hung out mostly on animation forums where that was considered constructive critisism.
But let me go into more depth...
It's choppy, make the movements from frame to frame a little smaller. The physics, it's like...there's no gravity. When they jump, they should fall to the ground at a fast rate, making your own sticks just makes the animation look ten times better, trust me. The movements, there a bit slow decrease the frame rate so it goes a little faster. Stiff camera, make action lines, as I like to call them, like if someone gets punched, you can make them soar a small distance, give it action lines, and you have a moving camera.

[Yorick]

Dang, I haven't pivoted in a while, and looking on my old ones, i thinks i could do alot better

[New1000]

Hey guys i got one but its at my new thread. come see it and put your ideas in on what you want the next comic to be.

Edit: im trying my best on the pivot comics smoothness. im trying my best. the one i already put on there is my best try. im saying its smoothness: great.

Edit2: heres a funny short. this guys smoking a cigar and some other guy wants to fight him. why does he shake his head at the end? because hes laughing.

[New1000]

Its a week. im allowed to double post!

Now im just testing on skating. i want to make a good skating mistake. this is part of what ill be using for the next comic if my idea wins.


Please tell me if i need improving on it.

[New1000]

Been a week double posting enabled!
Heres a animation


I put it in a video and its now also here:

http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=vSnt7wQRVgQ

Please go to the video, become a member and vote and review my video. i really need one cause i have never had one before.

[bige92]

woo time to bring this thread bak 2 life im bak in2 oivot an so here is a pivot i made just now lol

i cal it noob vs. jack jump the boxes

[New1000]

Bige92: i did the Jack vs Noob pivot back at StickPagePortal forums. its different then that though.