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  • LovelyUndeadVam
    Red-Eyed Wonder
    • Jul 2008
    • 1469

    #16
    heh heh heh, Courtney...well, if it's published, i'll let you figure it out.

    let's just say, everything you read is important, because you never know if it will come to something MORE important. my writing style is...weird, at best. things happen at the end of the book that was mentioned in the beginning, and if you weren't paying attention before, you would have to go back and re read. i admit, i've had to do it before in a book. it wasn't fun, but after the first time, you learn.
    GH Family (possibly the coolest )
    Brother: ~GH Dog~
    Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
    (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
    Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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    • Heartofthedark
      Veteran
      • Jul 2006
      • 5931

      #17
      If the worst happens and it doesn't get published will you post it so we can continue reading
      (I find it interesting )

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      • LovelyUndeadVam
        Red-Eyed Wonder
        • Jul 2008
        • 1469

        #18
        sure.

        i'm going to warn you, it is a romance. or, at least, it's supposed to be.
        GH Family (possibly the coolest )
        Brother: ~GH Dog~
        Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
        (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
        Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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        • Heartofthedark
          Veteran
          • Jul 2006
          • 5931

          #19
          So If a book can interest me in the first chapter then I would like to continue reading

          Glad that you might post it

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          • LovelyUndeadVam
            Red-Eyed Wonder
            • Jul 2008
            • 1469

            #20
            i'm glad you like it. i don't know if i can finish it. you know, with school starting in all i'm pretty busy.
            GH Family (possibly the coolest )
            Brother: ~GH Dog~
            Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
            (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
            Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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            • Justeazy
              Too Powerful!!!
              • Jul 2008
              • 2542

              #21
              Well, I hope you can!!!
              I would like to be able to read it all...
              READ
              >>CLICK>>sigpic<<CLICK<<
              It'll SHOCK you!
              Post anything and everything about Short Circuit HERE!

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              • LovelyUndeadVam
                Red-Eyed Wonder
                • Jul 2008
                • 1469

                #22
                i dunno, i have A LOT of editing to do. i didn't put enough details and i already wrote 17 chapters. ughh, i don't want to read AGAIN. i've read it so many times i can recite it back to front. i don't know what to do. i also have a very bad case of "writer's block" and can't come up with one good idea.

                maybe i'll read it a couple years from now, when i forget what i wrote...i dunno. does anyone want the second chapter??
                GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                Brother: ~GH Dog~
                Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                • Justeazy
                  Too Powerful!!!
                  • Jul 2008
                  • 2542

                  #23
                  YES YES YES PLZ
                  I would like that very much, YES YES YES
                  READ
                  >>CLICK>>sigpic<<CLICK<<
                  It'll SHOCK you!
                  Post anything and everything about Short Circuit HERE!

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                  • Heartofthedark
                    Veteran
                    • Jul 2006
                    • 5931

                    #24

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                    • Clank
                      The GH robot
                      • Sep 2008
                      • 11897

                      #25
                      Yeah!!
                      New York!
                      Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
                      There's nothing you can’t do,

                      Now you're in New York!
                      These streets will make you feel brand new,
                      These lights will inspire you,
                      Let's hear it for New York, New York, New York

                      JAY Z AND ALICIA KEYS - EMPIRE STATE OF MIND CLICK HERE

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                      • Heartofthedark
                        Veteran
                        • Jul 2006
                        • 5931

                        #26
                        I like the name switch Sounds like it just fits more

                        Edit : Okay finished reading and I have a question, are you doing the vampire type that like turns into a vampire at night or something Otherwise I would have to ask about how he is still alive in light

                        Other than that I love it! Can you post chapter three and I don't mind if it's in the shape of the first chapter you posted I still love reading it
                        Last edited by Heartofthedark; 09-09-2008, 23:53:44.

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                        • Justeazy
                          Too Powerful!!!
                          • Jul 2008
                          • 2542

                          #27
                          Yay, was good!!!
                          I like these kinds of stories, kuz they are awesome, and both of the characters sound a lot like me (Except the vampire/girl party, )
                          Haha, also love the fact that it is set in my city, so I know where those streets are and can visualize it better,

                          Hmmm... lots of little grammar/spelling mistakes, but it is good!
                          READ
                          >>CLICK>>sigpic<<CLICK<<
                          It'll SHOCK you!
                          Post anything and everything about Short Circuit HERE!

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                          • Heartofthedark
                            Veteran
                            • Jul 2006
                            • 5931

                            #28
                            Post another It's starting to get good

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                            • Chocbubbles
                              O for Awesome!
                              • Aug 2007
                              • 7348

                              #29
                              yeah post another. i love this story!!!
                              sigpic

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                              • Heartofthedark
                                Veteran
                                • Jul 2006
                                • 5931

                                #30
                                Aww That was so short I think you should post another

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