Help me please!

[Heartofthedark]

I was hooked by chapter one! Another chapter please! And please post the full story so I don't have to keep asking

[Heartofthedark]

Aww I will have to wait Maybe I will go play spore for 30 minutes untill I come back to read it I really hope you get it published so I can buy it and read it from front to back

Edit: Btw that was a very shocking twist For a second I thought she actually killed him!

[Heartofthedark]

Eeee another please!

Yes I shall try to remain more aware now

Edit: YAY! You posted another as I posted this

Edit edit: Okay read both posted and I have to say this is getting very good And I don't care if you indent or not This isn't a publishing agency! As long as you can spell correctly it's fine by me

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Ooooh! You almost got me with that one About 1/3 through I knew she was dreaming again

Edit: Ooh another! *Reads*

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - I'm so interested in your story Please post morrrreee!!

[Heartofthedark]

That was the best chapter ever! (12)

So is Rose a vampire? Or do they have to like kill the person to make them a vampire

[Heartofthedark]

Eeee! It's getting good and confusing! Just the way I like my stories

Thanks for clearing my question up

[Justeazy]

OMG, GREAT!!!

(So glad I'm a VERY fast reader so as to catch up...
This is inspiring me to publish my story, )

The dialog kinda got hard to follow in Chapter 8, but it is great.
The background info acutally explains 3 things!!! (That I HAVE FOUND, for all I know, there may be more, )

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely -

Looooooooooove the story

[Heartofthedark]

I would buy this book 50 times over and hand it out to the neighbourhood so they could read it!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

thanks. i'm happy you think that. now i'm going to have to write the rest of it! i'm interested myself! i forgot what i wrote for a minute there!

EDIT: i have to go eat dinner now. sorry everyone.

[Justeazy]

OMG, great (a little too romancy for me, but I still love it)

I knew they were connected, but I am wondering if that vampire appirition was real or not...
There is still something funny about that disease that led to the five month coma tho...


EDIT: I know how you could get this published:
Go to the Boarders in town (on stockdale highway). They have a whole "Local Writings" section, and then I could pick it up too (I buy books every couple weeks) Plus, I could buy some and ship them to Heart here too,

[Heartofthedark]

Oh nooooooooo! You can't leave me in the middle of the story like this

I hope a huge woosh of inspiration comes to you and you can finish the book

Edit: Justeazy - I was wondering that too Maybe we will have to wait and see what it actually was

[Justeazy]

@Heart: Read my above edit!
Omg, I wish I was home earlier so I could have been up with you, but I caught up quick enough.

@undead: Embarassing moment: Somewhere in like chapter 12 or something, I squeeled when I read one part,



EDIT: OMG, I just realized,,, you still need a TITLE We'll still have to help you think of one...

[Heartofthedark]

Justeazy - !! If you did that I would get a paypal account and send you some money(And lovely ) so I can go dropping off books all around the place
(Btw do you live in the same town as Lovely?)