Help me please!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

well. i have good news...and bad news.

good news is i get to stay home from school today.

bad news is the reason why i'm staying home is because i have severe pain in my hips and knees. imagine that, huh? i'm 14 and i'm already having hip pains! and at least i have a good attitude about it.

so no worries anyone. i'll be sitting all day now and probably typing more of my book.

by the way, can all of you clear up what's confusing you? i'm sort of lost. i can clear it up by the end of the book, unless you all think i should have a SECOND book.

[Heartofthedark]

Omb! I hope you get better tomorrow


Even though I may be happy you might be writing the book I still want you to be healthy!
Don't write the book if it starts to hurt! *Thinks of something parental to say* No if's and's or but's

Well before you start planning a second book I suggest you finish the first

[LovelyUndeadVam]

hahaha. well i'll be sitting all day regardless. so my old woman hips can just shut up. i will be writing all day, probably, so expect to see some chapter up by the end of the day (or sooner )

EDIT: forgot to say thankyou! thank you for the roses.

[Heartofthedark]

Lovely - Okay but don't push yourself!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

nawww, i was up all night thinking about the 25 chapter, and when i couldn't sleep i turned it on and started writing. i'm almost done with that one.

[Clank]

Yeah so do you actually have the title to the book now cos av just read 25 and 26

[LovelyUndeadVam]

Oh, no not yet. Justeazy and i are brainstorming, and Heart is giving me motivation but i haven't really come up with one yet.

[Clank]

Well what about just off reading 25 and 26 a very simple title

Fangs: demons at bay ( a bit rubbish)

or The sirens

or The blood circus

or The madworld

[LovelyUndeadVam]

ohh, The Blood Circus sounds scary.

[Clank]

Hi what about something slick and striking like

The blood parade
A tale of two fangs
Vampires in the dusk
Night of blood
Hells fangs
Slaughter
Blood raiders
sirens slaughte

[LovelyUndeadVam]

OHH The Blood Parade sounds good too! i'm liking your suggestions!

[Clank]

Ok then what about these


The blood heist
Sealed with a drop of blood
The blood bank
Twisted
Vampires together
The blood thieves
The blood sirens
Gold or blood
Just love blood
blood envy
The red puddles

[LovelyUndeadVam]

i dunno, i thing The Blood Parade is winning, but i might tweak it a little cause this book is a romance. hmmm. naww. i like The Blood Parade the best. and it goes with my idea of the cover art.

[Clank]

What ides have other people suggested

[LovelyUndeadVam]

The Light in my Dark and...uhh. there were others but i can't remeber them. we kinda tossed them in the brainstorm pool.

EDIT:
sort of like my idea, but tweaked:

http://media.photobucket.com/image/blood%20rose/DRAGONZeye13/bleedingrose.jpg?o=96