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    yes those are all the things i was wondering 2!!!
    those are the parts that were confusing me
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    • Lol, I don't necessarilly need to know these (like those that put the timeline after the last chapter) but I would like to know, lol.

      I hope she at least answers SOME of them, lol.
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      • Justeazy-WOW that's a lot of questions. i guess i'm going to need a SECOND book after all!

        but, because you want to know, and i've also grown to like you too, i'm going give you insight to an authors mind.

        1: What's the deal with the daylight walking...
        it's a myth in this book. they can stand the sunlight.

        2: Damien knew Courtney was Grants wife, why was he working with her for a while? (When she was controlling him, when he snapped outta it, he didn't remember what happened, but he knew everything that happened when he was working with Courtney)
        Courtney LET him remember. Damien did know, but he didn't know that Courtney even had a power.

        3: Why, (it had been years since grant bit her, and he could track her easily) did he not ever show himself again until Damien was in the scene?
        he did show himself. in the house and at the hospital. she was alone both times.

        4: How did Rose's parents die?
        muahaha...

        5: Why/how does Rose know just how to defeat Grant/Courtney after just learning Grant's real name...
        she knew that it would stun him. which, in turn, gave her enough time to break his back bones(they heal a lot slower than the flesh)

        6: Will Rose ever visit "Bill" again like she said.
        i'm not sure yet.

        7: Is "Bill" Dracula??? And, if not, will they ever see him (since Damien said he is alive, and I took that to a meaning)
        (If he is Dracula, I think the location should be somewhere different, *cough*Transylvania*cough*)
        no, bill is not Dracula. that comes later. *grins*

        8: WHAT IS THE DEAL WITH THAT MYSTEROUS 5 MONTH COMA ENGAGING DISEASE???
        i had to think of a way to end school! i didn't want to describe it ALL so i just gave her a disease.

        9: How come noone wonders about their red eyes when they are talking to everyone? Everyone just seems to accept it as normal...
        most of them can't see the red eyes, but Rose was meant to be a vampire, so she had the natural ability to see them.

        10: Does the world think nothing of these random attacks with victims being bitten on the neck commonly?
        they heal quickly, which Rose did not know.

        are you good? yes, yes, going once going twice. SOLD the the gentleman with the name Justeazy. hahaha. so i guess i DEFINENTLY need a second one, eh?
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        • YEP, you will probably get lots of questions outta me because that is just the way I am,
          If I annoy you, or you don't wanna give stuff away, just say so tho, lol

          Hahaha, YES YES YES,

          1: Good Enough
          2: Hmmm... interesting...
          3: I meant, he never came back to Rose until AFTER she met Damien
          4: Lol, I get it ( lol)
          5: Hmmm... not exactly what I was thinking about... but good, lol
          6: Ooh, possibility of a sequel!?!
          7: Ooh, a BIGGER possibility of a sequel!?!
          8: ... cheater ...
          9: Okay, didn't even think of anything that way... but then... why does "Bill" need to wear contacts?
          10: Hmmm... So, they always bite Drunk Guys so they won't remember and don't report it, jk
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          • haha, very funny with the drunk guys. and yes, i did cheat a little. i need some way to make a long time go by, and i was just thinking off the top of my head. NONE of this was preplanned. i just...did it.
            GH Family (possibly the coolest )
            Brother: ~GH Dog~
            Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
            (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
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            • Hmmm...
              (OMG, GH needs to get this smilie so I don't have to rip the URL from a different site)

              I've been meaning to do this for a long while...

              In the morning, call this number:
              328-9800 (Borders; 4980 Stockdale Highway)

              Ask for the service desk, then ask about the "Local Writings Publication" program. That is a good way for beginning/unknown writers to get their works published.


              I believe you get more out of it if you sell more copies! (Which you will if I/Mailing to heart has anything to do about it, )
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              • haha. will doo. i probably won't be awake for a while though. i tend to sleep in on the weekends.

                soo i have to know. on a scale from one to ten, what's the rating on my book? (which i spent two months on, stopped for six, then continued until it was done. )

                EDIT: originally, i was going to make Damien leave Rose, because he didn't want to kill her in the first place. but then i decided that it was too much like Twilight (the book that inspired me in the first place) so i didn't do that. though it would have been a nice twist in the plot.
                GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                Brother: ~GH Dog~
                Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                • Hmmm... I'd prob give it 8.5/10, prob... give or take a little from after editing/final version, lol.

                  That okay then! If you call in the middle of the day, more likely a manager there who can help you better, lol.
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                  • hahaha. yeahh, "i'm great in bed. i can sleep for hours." it suits me soo well. did you read my above edit?
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                    Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
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                    • write another one...PLEASE???!!! *puts on irresistible puppy eyes*
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                      • Choc-awww. i can't resist the puppy dog eyes! i am going to write another. that one will be better.
                        GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                        Brother: ~GH Dog~
                        Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                        (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                        Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                        • Yep, read it...
                          Don't know what to say to it, but I think the book was better this way than it would have been that way, lol.
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                          • yeahh, cause then everyone would have been mad at Damien for leaving.

                            and yes, i would make five or six copies. i would send one to you and Heart, then to my friends Shannon and Danielle. then to my mom...thennn one for me. cause every writer needs a copy of their own books.
                            GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                            Brother: ~GH Dog~
                            Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                            (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                            Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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                            • I like the answer to number four

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                              • thank you. haha. well, now i'm trying to figure out how i'm going to get my book from my laptop to a disk or something because i need to get it printed. *thinks really hard* it's too bad my mom sleeps forever in a day!
                                GH Family (possibly the coolest )
                                Brother: ~GH Dog~
                                Cousins: Chocbubbles, Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
                                (highlight the text, there's someone hiding. )
                                Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank

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