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hahaha. it was VERY VERY awesome. like, i was reading it, but i couldn't stop! it was really action packed and there are only three chapters so far! i can't wait for the fourth chapter!
that in my opinion, is an awesome book. if i'm sitting here thinking "WHAT is going to HAPPEN?!" then it's an awesome book. i have VERY good taste in books.
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well you're supposed to. keeps the readers interested and going. althogh occasionally i like to make a chapter where you can stop and mark your place. that's just my writing style though. i'm not sure how you prefer to write.
GH Family (possibly the coolest ) Brother: ~GH Dog~ Cousins: Chocbubbles,Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
(highlight the text, there's someone hiding. ) Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank
"It seemes that it had taken..." that should be "seems"
"And when she saw them, she though" THAT should be thought. i'm treating this like i would if i were reading a printed and bound copy of it. hope you don't mind.
very very well done on that one! i'm anticipating the next chapter as i eat my awesome food.
GH Family (possibly the coolest ) Brother: ~GH Dog~ Cousins: Chocbubbles,Animal Dragon, Yoshifan19, Emo234, 2 Tails, funja
(highlight the text, there's someone hiding. ) Ghost Robot Cousin: Clank
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