Short Circuit!

[Justeazy]

The first one wasn't a mistake, but I guess it'll be easier to understand as "anyone" so i'll change it anyway.

Yep on the second one.


Changed both!

[funja]

finished it was great cant wait for more i didnt find any more errors if i did it i would of had hundreds lol well i need to go to bed night

[Justeazy]

Thanks for the compliment!
Yay for few errors! (but I'm sure Escapegirl will find some more, she always does, )

I'm sure you would have done fine working on your own project, but it wouldn't have been the same, as it came from you.

Okay, night, I'll PM you when more gets posted up!

[EscapeGirl]

Just registered, and will read it off and on today between work thingies. Oh, and yeah, I'll let you know if I see any grammar or spelling errors...

[Justeazy]

Ooh!
I'll be excited to see what you think! (and what corrections you find, )

[EscapeGirl]

Oh, I'm such a pain.

5th paragraph of Sherell's story: The spelling of "surprise" was "suprise." *hides*

[Justeazy]

Actually, that is the SIXTH paragraph...
BUT, because of that, I found a typo IN the fifth paragraph!

Thx Much!