Short Circuit!

[funja]

whoo yay pm me or something

[Justeazy]

Sure, and I'll send you a block e-mail from the official "Short Circuit" website, as I see you have already registered!


MAJOR UPDATES: Fixed the "secret project" It is now refered to as "kapxapaic atoyo" in both refrences.
Updated "warning" messages for right clicking on all 5 protected pages

(you may want to right click on ZH and JB, hint hint)

Sharell: Added a little more background info, fixed/updated connections.
William: Put flashbacks in italics for less confusion. Re-developed his character where it didn't flow.
Jack: Fixed the truck math ( Stupid mistake on my part) Changed Veronica's List
Julia: Changed her character a little, fixed quote closing chapter 2, Fixed project name.

[funja]

ill have to tommorow its realy late

i dont see anything different with jb

[Justeazy]

Okay, have a good night, and thanks again for your interest in my book!

UPDATE: Changed all font to Courier New, and removed bold. I think it looks better like that.

[funja]

thnak lol oh your very welcome its really good

[Justeazy]

Because you all have been SOOO patient, I've decided to release the next three Sharell Irngstien chapters EARLY!!!
YAY!!!

If you haven't read it in a while, you may want to start from her beginning, as there have been a few changes.
Go Check them out!



I'm PMing everyone who has posted on this thread, incase you don't read this.

ALSO: Changed Tommy's middle name, can you guess who he is named after now?

[funja]

yay goes to read imediatly

idk maybe your nefew

[Justeazy]

Lol, nope funja!
I'm sure you'll get it after reading it!

[funja]

She couldnt figure out why but she always felt easy around him, and she never trusted anyone.....

isnt that supposed to be uneasy justeazy no pun intended

They head off, Jeeves leading the way. The had little conversation all day

i think it should have been headed

and they

[Justeazy]

Yep, all correct. Thanks for the corrections!
(chapter 3?)

EDIT: Corrected all three! Thanks again.

[funja]

yes chapter three just about to start 4 good so far

Looking for they keys, they found a room with some gas cans

their i think

[Justeazy]

Actually, supposed to be "the" but good catch!
(also, because of that, I noticed "mileage" is spelled "milage" just above)

[funja]

Tommy, meanwhile , decided that he would keep the model he found in the dealership model.


idk that should be office or something

And where you first say his middle name
you spelled it tomas idk if you can spell it that way but shouldnt it be thomas

[Justeazy]

lobby, thanks!
I got that, both times it said "THEY keys" instead of "THE keys" and both times I spelled mileage as "milage" just looking for that "THEY keys" you quoted.
Thanks much, you got a 5-in-1!


Nope, Tomas is right, I did it the uncommon way on purpose.
(Just like Sharell is spelled as such, instead of cheryl or sheryl)

[funja]

oh cool and wehere he make the gun

150000 volts to instantly kill any it contacted


anyone


However, as the victim of this weapon was the ground, the batter was sure to run dry

Battery