Short Circuit!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

woop i really like this story! i think you should have all of them travel to the west coast! yup. our town is o-ah-some.

[EscapeGirl]

@Justeazy....The whistle smiley is : boo:, without the space.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVING the story! And I can't believe I was wrong with the connections! And I must say,

I am not sure that Borring and the others will ever be prepared for the things I think they will encounter! Oh, and I want to hear the rest of the warning message!

Well done, once again! I'm glad I am awake to read it!

@Lovely....Yeah! West Coast! Wait....not so sure I want all that here.

[Justeazy]

Umm...

Sorry, but if you have already read it, you may have to read it again...
Don't worry, just the end. I fixed something, and added something else.

Just after the "list" that Veronica wrote up,

Ooh, Escape, you may just be suprised!
If you want to talk connections more in-depth, PM me!

THX for the support, but, just in case you are wondering, Sharell's story in in the WEST COAST! (Washington, )


PS: Thanks for that smiley! It wasn't the EXACT one I was looking for, but it works,

[Justeazy]

IMPORTANT:
I changed the color of the link on the first page so it stands out better!
I added a running list of those who supported me to the first post also!

Also, updated the "Zombie History" page, read all about it!
Hope you read the fixed version of Jack Borring's part 2!

[EscapeGirl]

Still a great chapter! And the new facts on the Zombies is an interesting summary of the things we, as the readers, have learned thus far! Nice touch!

Always looking forward to mooooooooooooooooooooore!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

dance with me. so that eazy knows that we want the next chapter ASAP! hahaha.

[EscapeGirl]

Will do!



Weeeeellll? Where's the next chapter!??!

[Justeazy]

IMPORTANT:
Updated the William Stephenson's latest section, another flashback near the end.
Fixed all of the typos I was told about too!

Keep your thoughts coming!

Also, if you posted and I forgot your name on the lead post, please tell me!

[funja]

ohh good flash back
made me feel like i was there

[Justeazy]

Haha, thanks funja! That's what I was going for!

Posted the next chapter (well, PART of it, ) of Julia Stapleton!

I think you will like it, except the fact that it raises questions instead of answering them.
(Will post the rest later, want to see reactions for this part first, )

[funja]

okay goes to read

does this sentence look right

The white light that was this state slowly diffused into the bright hum of flourescent lights

okay seems wierd oh no the whitecoats got her i hope they dont trace my ip address ahhhhhh oh gosh stupid dog

[Justeazy]

Which part are you talking about? "The white light that was this state" or the "bright hum"???

[funja]

this state slowly diffused
shouldnt there be a comma or something in there
cause if it doesnt i need to know what that sentence means


edited my above post

[Justeazy]

Hmmm... well, it could be
"The white light, that is this state, slowly diffused into the bright hum of flourescent lights"
I could add commas like that!


WHAT DOG?

[funja]

my dog