Short Circuit!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

hahaha. good point. i CAN be like that.






beware of my dancing army.

[Heartofthedark]

"Neither would I, Mr. Harris" she stated, trying not to let the fear break through the sense of pride, now even more evident in her voice. Then, whispering to herlsef "No, I would not have that..." letting the fear show through, but still not completely, not even to herself.

Spelling mistake

[Justeazy]

@Undead:
OMG, OH NOES!!!

@Funja: Oops you are totally right
It wasn't supposed to be like that, I'll go fix right away...

EDIT: Fixed it. Better funja?
EDIT2: You are totally right on that TYPO too! (heart)
EDIT3: Fixed that too!

[funja]

good catch heart
@justeazy yes it is
(was that sarcastic)
it is hard to tell online

[LovelyUndeadVam]

@eazy-that's a lot of edits.

[Justeazy]

@Funja: No, not sarcasm. An actual question, because when I fixed it, I wondered if you meant how I fixed it, or to make it another title (like the dark red that says "her story" at the top of the page) just making sure,

@Undead: true, but I didn't need to double (or quadruple) post, and it hadn't been anyone else posting yet,

[funja]

sorry confused
it would stand out more a differnt color
but it is up to you

[Justeazy]

No. I chose to do it this way, because then I don't have to worry about the "SPONSORS" things getting in the way.
Would you like it a different color tho? I could make it so

[funja]

i dont really care but i could go to the cahpters faster
so (yes) if it isnt too much troulbe

and do you mind if i favorite you book page thing

[Justeazy]

@Funja: Sure, you can do that, but no saving the book itself,

Hmmm... I'll just leave them how they are... but you can find it easily by hitting "F3" on your keyboard, and just typing the number, as I only use words (like "two") in my story, instead of numbers (like "2") that are the section headers.

[funja]

okay ill do that next time and pm me if you post a new chapter

[LovelyUndeadVam]

HURRRRRYYYYYY!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEAASE!!!









TIMES A MILLION! haha. for all the dancing you and Heart did combined.

[EscapeGirl]

Julia looked at Mr. Harris, dismay platered all over her face.

(Should be plastered.

Now....your book has me very intrigued. I want to know what the "facility" is all about, and I have to admit, I haven't yet found the parts that tie in together. But I assume that

Sharrell has met up with Stephenson at that intersection, but I'm not sure.

So very good. Keep up the writing, and let me know when you post more! *rushes off to read Geordiboy's story*

[Justeazy]

@ALL: The next section is up!!! Part 2 in Jack Borring!

@Funja: PM'd you,

@Undead: Lol, I did, Thanks for dancing for me, your welcome for doing it for you, (thanks for saying "PLE...ASE" lol )

@Escape: Okay, thx
Gotta go fix that... *rushes off to edit story*

Hmmm... Idk... maybe we will find out...
Glad you are intrigued,

Nope, just gonna tell you right now that is not right.
(Two of them reside in Stephenson's story tho, )

Thanks much for your support!
I'll have to PM you too!

[Clank]

Really love the story, i really like the way you have sortta developed each character and recognised them as individuals, it reminds me a bit like the tv program 'heroes'