Poems

[LovelyUndeadVam]

i liked it. it was very nicely written!

[Emo234]

Thnx to all

[Clank]

YEAH THANKS to everyone for comments

[Rima]

Great work geordie nd Emo.. I liked it too its a very nice poem.....

[Clank]

Thanks RIMA

[Emo234]

Awwwww.......thank u rima

[super_T]

Here's a haiku I made:

Old dewy meadow
Flowers sway in the sweet breeze
A breathtaking sight

[LovelyUndeadVam]

that's very nice super_T

[super_T]

thanks

[LovelyUndeadVam]

welcome.

[Emo234]

Very good super_t nd welcome to the poems thread glad to have a new member here

[Clank]

OK ok here is a sad poem i wrote myself, it is sad i think... so i'll let you read it

I come home, i shiver
I sit on the stairs and hear them argue, hear them scream
I sit down, i tremble, i cover my ears, its hard, it may seem
I lie down and cry
I lie on the couch and hear the glasses smash
Hear the vases against the wall crash
I fall down and shake
I cant take it, i just cant, then i hear the footsteps
i hear the noises
the door sways it opens, i lie on the floor
the tears drop hard, so hard, so so hard.
I hear it, i can feel it, i cant see it, i know its there.
I go to bed and hear the creaks,
its happening again, all over again, it doesnt stop
i get up and i go to school, does it end
no it doesnt. it carries on. i feel alone, no one to talk to
i remain silent, i dont speak, i shake and i tremble.
I walk through the door and it continues. Its hard, so fierce
I pick up the phone, i put it down again.
I pick up the rope and i put it down.
I pick up the knife, i put it down.
It starts again, over and over.
I fall and continue to fall. Its hard, so so hard.
When i hit the ground, i feel like dirt, like muck
When i hear the shouting, its like im a dog.
Trapped in a cage, like im alone, trapped in bars.
When will it stop? It needs to end
It doesnt and it never will.
Help. Please help. i tremble and shake.
All i need is hope, someone give me hope.
I see a climbing frame, it looks big. I have rope in my hand.
I pace up and down, i make my choice.
What will it be. What could it be.
Its would be over, i think.
The suffering, the pain gone. The end.
No one would care. no one would remember.

[LovelyUndeadVam]

! are these written about your home life? because most of mine are about how I feel and how I react to things, but i don't know about you.

very well done.

[Clank]

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! i
just wanteed to write a very sad poem so i wrote it about that d you think i would have time to go on the computer if my life were like that

[Chocbubbles]

wow that's a really good poem Geordieboy