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Wow, I've missed a few poems
Very nice rhymes everyone: Someguy, Chocbubbles, and funja
Really great work
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Great job, you guys/girls. Lovely poems!! Look forward to reading more of them should any of you feel inspired. 
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Ok i am posting one.....
>>>> *^* “Lonely *^* Little *^* Christmas *^* Cat” *^* <<<<
Christmas Cat…..,
Oh Christmas Cat…..,
Lonely Little Christmas Cat….,
I always wonder…..,
We’re you’re at……,
Lonely Christmas Cat…..! ! !
She ran away one Christmas eve….,
Never to be seen again…..,
That’s why I miss my Christmas cat….,
Lonely Christmas Cat…..! ! !
I leave food out every night…..,
Hoping that she’ll come back….,
I pray and pray that she’s alright…..,
Lonely Christmas Cat…..! ! !
Another season has gone by…..,
And just when tears begin to dry…..,
My memory just won’t deny…..,
My Lonely Christmas Cat….! ! !
Christmas Cat…..,
Oh Christmas Cat…..,
Lonely Little Christmas Cat….,
I always wonder…..,
We’re you’re at……,
Lonely Little Christmas Cat…..! ! !
And since you’re gone…..,
There's a chill of emptyness.....,
In my heart......,
For without you......,
I’m so Lonely Christmas Cat…..! ! !
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"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow......
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.........
Just walk beside me and be my friend
" 
My Online Family
Brother-Geordieboy
Sis-Mojotolo and Rima
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wow....someguy ,chocbubbles ,funja nd pratik....ur poems are awesome...
great work guys
Sister: Mojotolo * Brother: Pratik732006 , Clank nd lots of good frnds...
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For SUCCESS,and most
PEOPLE Do,BUT ONLy
a few know
That a Definite Plan,
Plus a BUrning Desire
For SUCCESS are the
only Dependable
means of Accumulating
SUCCESS
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Wowwww everybody. tis really great to see other people writing poems
New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New YorkComment
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Nice job pratikComment
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Awww...pratik! That's a sad poem. But so sweet and nice. Thanks for sharing.
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Ok this is a poem i made up just about 5 minutes ago
I am torn
I am lost
In a viel,In a shroud
I am one in a crowd.
Long years have past
Long minutes have gone
I am now here
Listen
How can you live your life
When nobodys watching.
See
How can you die
when nobody knows your alive
Hear
How can you feel pain
When you are painless
Touch
How can scent the angels
when you are not in heaven
I am and always will be
I will look when i cross the road
when i turn a corner
when i sleep at night
when i sink into my bed
What can i do with hope
turn it into love
into faith
how can i live when i am not here
when i am unknownNew York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New YorkComment
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wow great poem Geordie
and i loved ur poem Pratik it was sad but cute
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tnx everyone for the comments on the poem
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"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow......
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.........
Just walk beside me and be my friend"
My Online Family
Brother-Geordieboy
Sis-Mojotolo and Rima
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Yeah yours was really good Pratik Impressive
New York!
Concrete jungle where dreams are made of,
There's nothing you can’t do,
Now you're in New York!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
These lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for New York, New York, New YorkComment
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tnx again geordiesigpic
"Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow......
Don't walk behind me, I may not lead.........
Just walk beside me and be my friend"
My Online Family
Brother-Geordieboy
Sis-Mojotolo and Rima
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Wow Great poems EVERYONE I'm really proud to have alot of poets as my friends ;D
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