Rhymes!!

[Jess]

Poetry

Well I am pretty good at poetry. My teacher says that I could publish some of them, so I wanted to share.

Hereis one that I wrote:


Screaming Silence

Those few seconds said a lot
Although not a word was spoken
And no one moved
All were still
You could hear the breathing of all the men
The gentle wisps of air
Came out hot and fast
Those few seconds said a lot

All eyes were pasted on me
Like some type of glue
That could never be broken
It is called silence
Something can be broken
And never fixed
But always comes back
All eyes were pasted on me

It seemed like eternity
Limited eternity
Forever at a stand still
But only a few threads
In the gigantic tapestry called time
I was afraid to move
But move I must
It seemed like eternity

I stood there
Not daring to move
But they expected something
I was scared
What do they want?
I am supposed to say something
To remedy what I did?
I stood there

Alone, but surrounded
I faced their angry faces
They were mad
They couldn?t understand
What had I done that was wrong?
Finally, the silence broke
I said, ?Sorry?
Alone, but surrounded

[Lilliputt]

I was just about ta post when da thread went with a POOOF!! HMPF!

That is a very good poem ya wrote, my dear grand daughter *Feels very proud of grand daughter* I think it is a little sad, though I am touched. Thanks for sharing

[Darknight]

*feels Proud* Thats My On-line daughter

[Jess]

Thank you guys I hope it is alright that it doesn't rhyme

[Carmit]

dear santa hears my christmas list

dear santa hears my christmas list


Dear Santa, Here's My Christmas List
I hope you'll bring it all.
I've only asked for gifts my parents
can't find at the mall.

I'd like to have a UFO,
with aliens inside,
and maybe a Tyrannosaurus Rex
that I could ride.

A ninety-nine foot robot
is a present I could use.
I'll also need a time machine,
and rocket-powered shoes.

Please bring a gentle genie
who will grant my every wish,
and don't forget a wizard's wand,
and, yes, a talking fish.

Of course, I'll need a unicorn,
and won't you please provide
a dragon, and a castle
in the English countryside.

Of course, the weight of all these things
might cause your sleigh to crash.
If that's the case, dear Santa,
please feel free to just bring cash.


Copyright © 2006 Kenn Nesbitt
All Rights Reserved
This poem appears in the book Santa Got Stuck in the Chimney.
If you copy-paste anything, be sure to give credit to the real author.[/COLOR][/B]

[Acelightning]

here is my poem from talent amass http://www.gamershood.com/forum/show...7&postcount=78

[Daisfunky]

I wrote this poem for a friend when her dad died. 6 months after her mum died! It was awful. Anyways it gave her comfort. Hope you like it too.

We walked the path of this life,
Hand in hand, heart to heart,
Joined as one, Husband and Wife,
Until we had to part.

Death is a curious idea,
My love for you is very real,
It pains me to live without you near,
It's something time will never heal.

Now my darling, I close my eyes,
and imagine your smiling face,
as my spirit flies towards the skies,
and I'm reunited with you in grace.

No one could truly be mourning,
If they just knew how grateful I am,
I'm with you and it's like a summer's morning,
Joined forever, woman and man.

I look briefly at the ones who have to live on,
In the world of trials and strife,
but I know you'll be fine, you wont go wrong,
You too, will leave this life.

Do not be down,
don't you frown,
let go of your sorrow!
because soon there'll be a glorious sound,
and a promise of tomorrow.

[jenni.p123]

they are great!

and that was a really beautiful poem dais

[Crimsonthread]

Carmit, did you really write that yourself? I found it on this site: http://65.61.100.98/poem-176.html

[Gameguy49]

Here's one I wrote:

Little tommy
Told her mommy
"How come I love you?"

The mommy said,
"Just turn your head,
and figure out why you do.

So tommy thought,
thinked a lot
and came up with a clue.

"She always hugs me
every way she does,
she can kiss me,
which is a sign of love"

So then tommy was back,
and then asked her mom,
"I love you mom,
and we're a big family,
lets cherish it!"

The mommy said next,
"That didn't rhyme."
Tommy said,
"Lets just go to the park."

I just thought up a name, ok?

[mini demond]

i know she diddent but dont give her a hard time shes banned

[Crimsonthread]

I wasn't trying to give her a hard time. I just think plagerism's very wrong. No hard feelings, Carmit.

[leada93]

The Soldiers Poem

Twas The Night Before Christmas,
He Lived All Alone,
In A One Bedroom House Made Of
Plaster And Stone.

I Had Come Down The Chimney
With Presents To Give,
And To See Just Who
In This Home Did Live.

I Looked All About,
A Strange Sight I Did See,
No Tinsel, No Presents,
Not Even A Tree.

No Stocking By Mantle,
Just Boots Filled With Sand,
On The Wall Hung Pictures
Of Far Distant Lands.

With Medals And Badges,
Awards Of All Kinds,
A Sober Thought
Came Through My Mind.

For This House Was Different,
It Was Dark And Dreary,
I Found The Home Of A Soldier,
Once I Could See Clearly.

The Soldier Lay Sleeping,
Silent, Alone,
Curled Up On The Floor
In This One Bedroom Home.

The Face Was So Gentle,
The Room In Such Disorder,
Not How I Pictured
A United States Soldier.

Was This The Hero
Of Whom I'd Just Read?
Curled Up On A Poncho,
The Floor For A Bed?

I Realized The Families
That I Saw This Night,
Owed Their Lives To These Soldiers
Who Were Willing To Fight.

Soon Round The World,
The Children Would Play,
And Grownups Would Celebrate
A Bright Christmas Day.

They All Enjoyed Freedom
Each Month Of The Year,
Because Of The Soldiers,
Like The One Lying Here.

I Couldn't Help Wonder
How Many Lay Alone,
On A Cold Christmas Eve
In A Land Far From Home.

The Very Thought
Brought A Tear To My Eye,
I Dropped To My Knees
And Started To Cry.

The Soldier Awakened
And I Heard A Rough Voice,
"santa Don't Cry,
This Life Is My Choice;

I Fight For Freedom,
I Don't Ask For More,
My Life Is My God,
My Country, My Corps."

The Soldier Rolled Over
And Drifted To Sleep,
I Couldn't Control It,
I Continued To Weep.

I Kept Watch For Hours,
So Silent And Still
And We Both Shivered
From The Cold Night's Chill.

I Didn't Want To Leave
On That Cold, Dark, Night,
This Guardian Of Honor
So Willing To Fight.

Then The Soldier Rolled Over,
With A Voice Soft And Pure,
Whispered, "carry On Santa,
It's Christmas Day, All Is Secure."

One Look At My Watch,
And I Knew He Was Right.
"merry Christmas My Friend,
And To All A Good Night."

[humphryboop]

My first rhyme!

I am out of time
this is my last rhyme
I am tired
you are fired

[maureen.clayton]

people of gamerhood gather round
dont be worryed im not going to pound you
im here to say this is the best fourm eva