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    Story Reviews (for stories in the creativity subforum)

    This thread has been created after the model of the Story Reviews thread in the GamersHood Planet Subforum.

    Here you can give feedback to stories that are written by members that have nothing to do with our GamersHood characters.

    If you are giving a feedback, please tell first which story you are talking about.

    Make sure you express your feedback in a respectful manner.
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    Kidnapped

    It's a good start. However, I didn't think it was flowing the way it should and it felt like you were repeating yourself. Still I'm exited to see what you'll make of this


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    • #3
      Yes. Remember, it's only a start. As I make more the story should/will flow into a nice story.

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      • #4
        Kidnapped

        that sounds really good man! i cant wait untill the other chapters come out!!!! good job !
        Last edited by Mistery; 06-19-2008, 17:12:58. Reason: Moved to appropriate thread
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        • #5
          Thanks.
          If you want you can help. If you want to help pm me and we can set up some details.

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          • #6
            Just read Elni's stories Great! I really like mythology, so the first one was perfect for me, and I'm also really exited do find out how GH really was made! ^^
            Rock on, Chicken!


            Erh, hi guys! Long time no see

            SnoedaIva is my GHFGNP Ik mis jou

            *Crash* is the name of my cpu

            Divorcee of Hitman, and the #1 GH-night owl

            Insecurity is my worst enemy

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            • #7
              Thank you Simple I hope you like the other part as well. I finish it probably today or tomorrow
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              • #8
                Looking forward to it!


                Erh, hi guys! Long time no see

                SnoedaIva is my GHFGNP Ik mis jou

                *Crash* is the name of my cpu

                Divorcee of Hitman, and the #1 GH-night owl

                Insecurity is my worst enemy

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                • #9
                  How GH Planet was created

                  Ooh! I wanna know what happens at 7 pm!? Well done dear Elni! Well done. Looking forward to more.

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                  • #10
                    Yay new story for me.
                    wheeeeeeeeeeeee.

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                    • #11
                      I really wanna know what's inside of that box, Elni


                      Erh, hi guys! Long time no see

                      SnoedaIva is my GHFGNP Ik mis jou

                      *Crash* is the name of my cpu

                      Divorcee of Hitman, and the #1 GH-night owl

                      Insecurity is my worst enemy

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                      • #12
                        How GH Planet was created

                        Wow, that's a great story idea!
                        Great chapters so far Elni!
                        I had to giggle about Larry, the turtle

                        And as Crazy, I'm also very curious to know what's inside the box

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                        • #13
                          How GH Planet was created

                          OH! What a fun story Me wanna read more!
                          Thank you for posting, dear Elni

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                          • #14
                            Death Wish

                            I say that the story Death Wish is one of the best story's I have read so far.
                            It is awesome
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                            • #15
                              How GH Planet was created - Part 3

                              OMB, that was such a funny and interesting chapter, I really liked it a lot
                              And I had to laugh after the last 2-3 sentences
                              Keep up good work on that story, I'm looking forward to reading what happens next

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