Story Reviews (for stories in the creativity subforum)

[Elni]

Thanks Mystery I just finished part 4 Hope you enjoy it

I have to say that Death Wish is a great story and I look forward for the next chapter. But now that I am looking I can't find the thread Mayby someone can help this chicken

[Mistery]

How GH Planet was created - Part 4

Wow, what an interesting story, Elni
I really like it - and always when a chapter ends, I want to know what happens next

Sorry, Death Wish isn't available anymore.

[EscapeGirl]

How GH Planet was created

I only just now read more of your story. I've been busy and was a bit behind. Me sorry. Anyway, I love it! I found myself smilling and giggling at several parts! I loved how Mike teased Gam about the duck next door coming over to tease the turtle! So funny. I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to more.

[Mistery]

How GH Planet was created - Part 5

Yay, I'm REALLY enjoying this story a lot
And I'm so excited to know how it's going to continue!

[Elni]

Thank you very much Lilli, Escape and Mistery . I'll write the next part tomorrow as I have to go ashleep now (need to wake up at 5 a.m. )

Edit: I just read the Haunted story and I find it very interesting it is like I am watching a movie

[SimplyCrazy]

Wow, Elni I wonder who that girl is! Is she me? Jk.
This story's getting more and more interesting, and I hope you continue soon

[Elni]

Haunted

I liked the new part of this story. It remineds me the saying: Curiosity killed the cat. I think I sleep with my lights open today

@Simply
Thank you dear I'll try to write another chapter soon. Infact I'll try it now (If I don't find my self playing any games )

[SimplyCrazy]

@Eln
Yay

@Someguy
Just a little tip, writer to writer: Try to find a balance between calling your character by his/her name and calling them by their pronoun It'll make the story flow better if you don't start every sentence with "Jeff"

[someguy]

Yeah I just noticed that. I would probably be doing better if I weren't half asleep and paying more attention to a game I'm playing.

Edit: fixed the story, it should be a little better now.

[EscapeGirl]

How GH Planet was created

That was such a fun read. I love the creativity and imagination that went into the creation of this planet. Loved reading each chapter. Thank you!

[SimplyCrazy]

I read the word 'squirrel' and wen't "Oh my god!" before I scrolled down and saw my name Who is this 'Mike', Elni? I think I wanna get to know him
Anyways, great way to end the story! can't wait for the next one!

[humphryboop]

I like haunted

[New1000]

How GH Planet was created

It was a good story. i liked the last part. please make more stories. i got an idea of what your next story will be but i rather let this up to you then saying mine because its your stories.

[Elni]

WOW your new chapter really made my heart bit faster. Please write the new chapter soon

Escape, Crazy and New Thank you for you kind words. I wasn't very happy with the end. It sound much better in my mind. The next story would be nicer

OW and New please tell me the topic of your story. I will ensure you you are going to be the idea person How GH was created was Mandy's idea . Infactg I just updated it in the first chapter


Edit
Sorry for the double posting I merged it I had to say that I liked the story someguy. I hope you get inspired for the next story.

[someguy]

Thanks Elni and any other fans of the story.
I need some new ideas, so if someone could give me an idea, that would be great.