Sorry it took long while to write my opinion.
I hope you understand what I wanna say..
Yes, it's hard for me coz the rhyme is the most important essence in the poems. To rhyme beautifully there're some omissions, replacements/shifts of the words and some literary-style expressions. Those make the poem far different from what we speak in the conversation.
But I could imagine that scenary by picking up the words and feel the rhyme, and thought it beautiful poem.
I hope you understand what I wanna say..
Originally posted by Lilliputt
But I could imagine that scenary by picking up the words and feel the rhyme, and thought it beautiful poem.
Well, maybe my daughter can help ya out. What didn't you understand?
) Glad ya liked it dear daughter 
Ok here is one
You liked that, huh sir Theme? 

You so great!


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