Story Reviews

[SuzyE730]

The not so shining star
I didn't even realize Crazy finished it >.< Unexpected ending but a really good fun story I'm gonna miss it!

The mysterious ride
I liked hot it started so I'll just hope it doesn't stop being as fun to read, which it probably won't

[Elni]

The Mysterious Ride

Poor Darknight. He must be very sad trying to be scary

[ShiningStar]

The Not so Shining star:
loved the ending!

The mysterious ride:
great so far! can't wait to read more!

[ShiningStar]

(sorry to double post last post was a few days ago, thought it would be less confusing, will fix if need to )

The Mysterious Ride, and The Great Quake Shake: Great story's so far!! can't wait to read more!

[Jones]

I made it into your new story, Escape/Funja. Very flattering.

[EscapeGirl]

Yes, Jones....rolling down the google mountains must've been quite dangerous!

The Elephant's Tale

Very nice beginning! I loved the end about the elephant learning to laugh. Looking forward to reading more about your pet elephant!

[ShiningStar]

The Elephants Tale: very cute story so far, can't wait to read more!

[SimplyCrazy]

The Great Quake Shake is turning out great I'm having a little problem reading Funja's parts, though..Maybe you need to work on your punctuation? (Just meant as a friendly hint ) I really like how the story's unfolding, tho But you forgot my special ability to sing Slurpies to sleep!

[Lilliputt]

An Elephant's Tale
Such an interesting start. I wanna read more!!
EDIT: Chapter TWO! YOU KILL ME

"Do you know conga?"

The Great Quake Shake
It's funny and a taste of excitement too . Good job so far Escape and funja


The Mysterious Ride
I am not finished buta so far I is laughing

"Geez! Dear kitten daughter...just how old -I mean 'unyoung' - do you think I am!?"

[funja]

tahnx for the comments on the great quake shake an thanx for the hint il try

and i love the mysterious ride so far

[Crimsonthread]

Escape, Lilli and Shining-- Thanks so much! More is coming soon.

[EscapeGirl]

The Elephant's Tale

Two words. LOVING IT. I LOLed several times. Especially chapter 3.

@Funja, Simply, and Mom ()...thanks for the comments on our stories.

[Lilliputt]

An Elephant's Tale

Chapter 3 is soooooooooo funny Love it! Thanks for writing

[Elni]

An Elephants tail

ROLF I liked the part where

Crimson was follwoing the elephants' "presents"

The Mysterious Ride
I especially liked :

"There's sooo much blood rushing to my head, and I'm still lightheaded! Hahahahaah!"

The Great Quake Shake

Slurp spider brrr at least the team get out ok XD

[Mistery]

An Elephant's Tale

Wow, I've seen that new stories have started, but I had a very busy week - hardly on GH, so that I had not been able to read them, sorry

Anyhow, I've now read the first 3 chapters of Crimson's story, and I have to say that I love it It's very cute, and also made me giggle

My fave parts are (yeah, there are quite a few ):

I took in another trunkful. “Okayz, sho I can talk. Nows whaz gonna happen?”

Now, the most important question: Do you conga?”

After a short conga lesson aboard the space ship (during which I destroyed only a few sensitive-looking instruments), Mistery and I suddenly appeared in front of a large room labeled “Chit Chat 3.” Man, this place WAS full of writing! I saw several creatures pulling items—such as tomatoes, strange bombs labeled “ROFL,” and dingy brownish-blue couch out from the word-worn room.

“Hey, Mistery! I've been quietly lookin for stuff to pack, but I suddenly realized... I don't have any stuff here! And I'm really no good at dancing... So can I ride an elephant when we move?”

“Sure, Crimson! Climb on this one—he seems to be pretty empty.”

Everyone began to conga, and I tried to remember what I’d learned without tossing the pup from my back. One, two, three, KICK! One, two, three, KICK!

At this point I was bursting in laughter since I imagined it

“WOOHOOOOOOO!” cried the pup as she sailed through the air and landed on her bum cushion. “That was fun! Thank goodness Lilli lent me an ASSet! Can we do it again?”

“Uhhhh… Sure! Hop on!” So I kicked and tossed, and she flew and bounced, until we both collapsed in a gale of laughter.

I was confused, too… I hadn’t taken anything, except the Crimson pup. And I’d given her back.

Everyone wished him a good night and, much to my surprise, he didn’t leave through the door as I expected. He simply… disappeared. But since no one else seemed startled by this method of exit, I figured in must be normal on Gamershood Planet. Things sure were different here!

Now I'm really curious how the story will continue



(For the other story writers - please bear with me )