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  • Yorick
    Nomad Hobo Fox
    • Jun 2007
    • 3053

    #91
    Comment on FIELD TRIP OF THE LOONIES

    good job very funny
    Last edited by Mistery; 09-27-2007, 03:19:22. Reason: Moved post here and added title to inform what it's all about ;)
    Time is a mysterious thing. never eat it.


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    • Lilliputt
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      • Aug 2006
      • 35280

      #92
      Aww... thank you Yorick!

      STILL struddling

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      • Mistery
        Super Moderator
        • Dec 2005
        • 61730

        #93
        Field Trip Of The Loonies

        The story is really very funny, hilarious
        Very good job, Lilli!!
        Well, I first wanted to add here my favorite parts, but it turned out that I would quote about the half of the story So I decided to leave it.
        I love the whole story, it was as I would have watched a movie

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        • Lilliputt
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          • Aug 2006
          • 35280

          #94
          YAY! I put smile on my fav aliens face!! Now I is gonna have a real good nights rest
          Glad you liked it, my dear friend and thank you for them kind words

          STILL struddling

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          PURPLE HELL is back and burning!! See you there!

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          • ShiningStar
            SuperStar Mod
            • Jan 2007
            • 14833

            #95
            the "field trip of the loonies" story was very funny! very well written!

            *~The Shining Star of GH~~*


            The riddlers gang: Vivi, Sumitra, Hunter, Bizarrochick, Monkey, Archaicdome, and Teeodd!
            June 15th is fundayja day! July 9th is Teeodd day! July 10th is Sumitra day! July 11th is Shining day! September 13th is Crazy day! September 18th is Robot day! October 13th is Party 4 Ever day! March 15th is Archaicdome day!

            *~a proud Mommy to be~*

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            • Sandbox

              #96
              LOL Lilli that was funny. I love the part where crazy tries to put her tail where an alien rump should go.

              Absoluetly wonderful.


              Glad I could help out

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              • SuzyE730
                I'm Innocent!!!
                • Jul 2007
                • 5317

                #97
                ROOOOOFL!!!!


                you evem added ME! But da captain would NEVER follow someone else! I think I just keps fighting the guards with a wooden sword!!!

                GREAT JOB! Lilli!
                Thank you Gamershood forum for teaching me proper English without realizing it.

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                • Lilliputt
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                  • Aug 2006
                  • 35280

                  #98
                  Aww, this is all very nice of ya'll. Thank you

                  @Shining
                  Me is tryin' my best when struggling with da words, yes

                  @Sandbox
                  I am glad you could help too

                  @Suzy
                  Yes, I did add you Wooden swords, huh? I am sure the guards would have been mighty impressed

                  STILL struddling

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                  PURPLE HELL is back and burning!! See you there!

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                  • EscapeGirl
                    Super Kitty
                    • May 2006
                    • 50764

                    #99
                    Labrythian AND Field Trip of the Loonies

                    @ Mom....

                    I just caught up on the labrynthian story. VERY well done, as always! You really do have a way with words! And I love the jealousy between Teeodd and Hunter! LOL.

                    And as far as the chocolate factory story.... I can just picture it!! Makes me think it's a bit like a slightly twisted, slightly alien storyline from Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory! I loved how everyone had such a hard time getting into their alien costumes!

                    Again, VERY well done!! Love the stories!! Keep 'em coming!

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                    • ShiningStar
                      SuperStar Mod
                      • Jan 2007
                      • 14833

                      #100
                      The not-so-shining Star

                      Crazy I love your story so far!

                      *~The Shining Star of GH~~*


                      The riddlers gang: Vivi, Sumitra, Hunter, Bizarrochick, Monkey, Archaicdome, and Teeodd!
                      June 15th is fundayja day! July 9th is Teeodd day! July 10th is Sumitra day! July 11th is Shining day! September 13th is Crazy day! September 18th is Robot day! October 13th is Party 4 Ever day! March 15th is Archaicdome day!

                      *~a proud Mommy to be~*

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                      • SuzyE730
                        I'm Innocent!!!
                        • Jul 2007
                        • 5317

                        #101
                        THERE'S A NEW STORY?! *runs in search of da new story* AH HA!


                        @Crazy
                        It's great so far! I can't wait for the continuation!
                        Thank you Gamershood forum for teaching me proper English without realizing it.

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                        • Lilliputt
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                          • Aug 2006
                          • 35280

                          #102
                          The not-so-shining Star

                          I have also read the beginning of this story. It is promising I hope there will be many more chapters Well done, Hjنrtat

                          STILL struddling

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                          PURPLE HELL is back and burning!! See you there!

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                          • Yorick
                            Nomad Hobo Fox
                            • Jun 2007
                            • 3053

                            #103
                            field trip of the loonies

                            i wish i was mentioned somewhere in it ...
                            Time is a mysterious thing. never eat it.


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                            • SuzyE730
                              I'm Innocent!!!
                              • Jul 2007
                              • 5317

                              #104
                              The not-so shining star

                              I've read the second part and it looks exciting!!!! ....oh wait...Aye? YES AYE!!!! IN PIRATE LANGUAGE!!!! Crazy you're a jenious!!!
                              Thank you Gamershood forum for teaching me proper English without realizing it.

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                              • ShiningStar
                                SuperStar Mod
                                • Jan 2007
                                • 14833

                                #105
                                The Not-so shining star:

                                love the new chapter!

                                The making of a Labyrithian:

                                Great so far love the new chapter!!!

                                *~The Shining Star of GH~~*


                                The riddlers gang: Vivi, Sumitra, Hunter, Bizarrochick, Monkey, Archaicdome, and Teeodd!
                                June 15th is fundayja day! July 9th is Teeodd day! July 10th is Sumitra day! July 11th is Shining day! September 13th is Crazy day! September 18th is Robot day! October 13th is Party 4 Ever day! March 15th is Archaicdome day!

                                *~a proud Mommy to be~*

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