Story Reviews

[Lilliputt]

I have AGAIN read da latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

OneBun tried to beam you up, but you had some strange choreography, lol." [...]"Maybe if I beam myself into the Sea of Knowledge again? Lol."

Comment: "Strange choreography" Fuuuunny! Oh and da lines are so like my dear sis would say 'em

"Yes, hmmm, okay. There is an equation to calculate the approximate weight related to the beaming energy. Hmmmm... me maths not so good." OneBun decided to try it withouth any calculation, just according to her feeling.

Comment: Now, THIS is what I call LOGIC!

OneBun immediately plugged carrots into her ears, and looked around, Becky howled in a strange voice, and Doglover ran around in circles, carrying Hollandgirl on her back. Lilliputt covered herself with the notes and said to herself: "I'm not scared. I'm not scared."

Comment:

OneBun finally realized that it would be good to let the others know that everything was okay.

Comment: Agreed!

I LOOOOOOOOVE da story! Hilarious! Thank you for writing, my dear wonderful friend

[Mistery]

I have read the first three chapters of Crazy's Treasure story. My favorite parts:

Crazy was sitting,trying to read, which wasn't easy since Hyper was sitting on her head trying to read the same book.

What a funny picture

Lilli was knitting, as the grandmother she was, Doglover was trying to find new ways to pffft, Escape was teaching her daughter how to dance, while Darknight was baking a cake with Becky.
ROFL

?THERE! This necklace was made by a... J. W. Elry!?


?Thaz where you're wrong, my loony friend. Da Lilli was talkin' to da alien last night, ya see, and she'd heard that a J.W. Elry lived in a small hut on Fox Island. He moved a while ago, but we still oughta find some clues.?

Very good Carrot Islanderish language, congrats

Since Zox was a pretty big phoenix at this time and Lilli was just a small carrot islander, Zox could easily fly carrying her on his back.

Awwwww, how cute

After this experience Lilli decided to try keep Zox awake by singing. This worked for a while untill Zox started ?sleeptalking?: ?ZZZ if you feel tired, stop the phoenix at the nearest island and zzzleeep for 15 minutes ZZZ.?



She finally decided to make a ?I'm sorry-song? for Zox.

Awwww.

?I've recenlty made a spray that prevents things from melting. I made it for volcanic eruptions and things like that, but if it can come useful, I'll be more than happy to share.?

Yay, I have discovered something

I love the story, and look forward to reading the continuation

[EscapeGirl]

@ Mistery....I see that you, too, like seeing your favorite parts, and I will try to remember to post them when I wake up again....I'm too sleepy for that now. But, WOW! What a great story!! I am one looney BatCat!! There were some terrific parts in there!! THANK YOU for being such a great author!! *makes not to self to post favorite parts.*

@ Simply...I will read your story when I wake up. I'm about to have online therapy.

[SimplyCrazy]

That's oke, Escape

@Mistery: Loved the new chapter. Here's my favorite parts:

There was a huge rumbling, the spaceship began to shake, and the group screamed in shock. OneBun immediately plugged carrots into her ears, and looked around, Becky howled in a strange voice, and Doglover ran around in circles, carrying Hollandgirl on her back. Lilliputt covered herself with the notes and said to herself: "I'm not scared. I'm not scared."

Comment: ROFL: I can actually picture this

On the platform BatCat, Murph, and Darknight appeared, sitting on a hill. "Oooops, I think that was too much energy.", the pink bunny concluded. The three beamed up loonies were very surprised, looked around, and finally recognized where they were.

Just a tiny bit too much energy

[Jess]

I like your story SC

[zillah0625]

good one

I really like the story!

[SimplyCrazy]

Which story

[doglover]

He/she's talking about Mystery's story (Darknight's Challenge)

[EscapeGirl]

The Twins Story

@Jenni and Mom...You both did a great job!! A funny read. You certainly described the perfect looniness that is GHP. And I love how they got initiated by getting injected by OneBun. If I remember I will post my favorite parts when I am not at work, and have more time.
Very good...BOTH of you!

[Lilliputt]

Uhm... why thank you, my dear daughter Thaz real nice of ya

[jenni.p123]

aww thanks escape

[Rannei]

I also loved the twin story! It was very funny to read, and it made me Lol Please make another one

[jenni.p123]

thanks rannei

i will need to talk to lilli about making another

[EscapeGirl]

The Flying Coffin and the Marbles

Oops! I never posted quotes from the Twins Story!

ROOOOOFL! Both of you are off to a terrific start! Hurry up Charmed...you're next!

Here are some favorite parts so far:

She shook her head gently but the usual rattle was not there anymore. She shook her head again a little rougher but no change. It had happened.

and then...

As both bordered the turbo flying coffin, they knew their long quest had begun.

also....

Somehow the idea to fly in a coffin didn’t sit all that well with her. Her sisters way to reassure her didn’t help much either because she kept insisting it wasn’t a deathbed as much as an eternal commodity of sorts. “Like a very big bag”, she would add as if that somehow would make Lilliputt feel better.

and this....

...typical smell of her sister. Frog legs and fish skulls. Ingredients she would say, for her majikyl brews that always failed.

[Lilliputt]

Oh... I ... thank you, dear daughter!

@Rannei
Thank you for your kind words
Why don't you and Jenni write a story?