Story Reviews

[ThemePark]

- Yes sir, our secret agent in the robot's head has reported that they are on the island with the spaceships.

No wonder I've been so vonfused lately!

[Mistery]

Thanks to Escape, Lilli and Sir Theme for posting

[Lilliputt]

I have read the latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

"Sing... it... down? Umm... ya mean... well... why? I mean... why me?", but Zox got impatient and said: "Somebunny needs to stop this chaos! And since Mystery is not here to take care of it, you have to help us! Sing!" [...]"Yes, sure. If Mystery is not here, I'm good enough to solve your problems. Hmpf!"

Comment: I just.... ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOFL My horrible SINGING will help solve AAAAALL da problems. Oh, and yeah when did I become a problem solver? Is that really being carefree?

"Oh my dear friend, don't feel hurt. It's not at all like you think. We all need your help, and since you have been able to help us so many times, we trust in your abilites.[..]

Comment: Aww...Becky!

[...]I promise that I won't say anything about your Eenie Meenie method anymore. Really.", and the robot stood up and left the office.

Comment: Da robot will not say anythin about ...? .... But I ....

<<Hmmm, very efficient method...>> the hero thought to himself, while he was watching the opponents climb up the ladder to the next floor. He quickly hid in a corner, and said: "Mystery, can you hear me?"

Comment: This is sooo excitin'

Mystery agreed and felt so happy about this idea, that she started to run around in circles yelling: "Yes, beam, do, yay!"

Comment:

"Honey, I think that you need to reboot.", then stopped his wife and pulled her thumb.

Comment: Da hubby is rebootin da wifey? Pfffft

He whispered: "Perfect Friend, your error calculations are getting better....", and made a strange grimace.

Comment: They...are? Well, I suppose once in a while it can happen...

I had a BUNDLE OF FUN reading this!! LOVED IT SOOOO MUCH! Thank you for writing, dear alien

Added some comments only I can't use any more...SMILIES *Bohooo smilie here*

Slooooooow dooooooown deeeeeeear shiiiiiiiip,
Giiiiiiiive reeeeeeest to the ooooooold chiiiiiip, <<OMB, I'm singing computer gibberish!>>
Reeeeduuuuuce locomoooootion, <<I'm turning alien!>>
Imaaaagine thee ooooocean, <<Yes, that's better.>>
And nooooow land on the flooooor,
Siiiiilent without a rooooooar. <<I'm turning Murph!>>

Comment: Is it possible NOT ta love this beautiful song?! I can hear da melody ya know...hum..tudelidum...YEAH! : haha:

She told Sir Theme to wait there, then walked up to Lilliputt, and hugged her: "Thank you dear friend. I'm so glad that nothing bad happened. And this is your merit."

Comment: I am actually blushing as I read this. Oh, why...pffft...now you really shouldn't ... I mean... oh thaz really nuthin' ya know *Blushes, whole face turns to tomato like color*

But no matter how he tried, there was no answer from the alien. <<Hmmm, should I sing the Alooney Song now?

Comment: Please dooo! : haha:

I neeeeed the invisibilityyyyy cloooooak. OMB, now I'm turning Lilli.

Comment: Da Darknight turning in to a.... GRANDMA??!! I die... ROOOFL!

EXCELLENT WRITING agian my dear wonderful FAVOURITE alien. I love this story soooo much! Thank you again for writing! BIG HUG

[Mistery]

Thank you very much for your nice and funny comments, Lilli
I'm happy that I could make you ROFL and blush and lol

[EscapeGirl]

OMB!! I loved it, Mistery!! Sorry I don't post the funny parts, but I will summarize my favorite parts!

I loved it when Lilli was singing to the Spaceship, and how we got to read her thoughts, too! Very nice!!

I also loved Darknight thinking about singing the alooney song, how he got hit by the beaming device, how you had to be robooted , and how I could picture the unlucky fox on Sir Theme's head! There were more....too! Just too funny!!

Wonderful, as always!! I loved it!! Keep up the fabulous writing!!

[Mistery]

Thank you so much Escape

[Lilliputt]

I have read the latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

OneBun, who still remembered her earlier adventure on Mystery's ship, reassured the group that she had taken enough notes meanwhile to be able to fly a ship.

Comment: Yay! Da bunny is gonna fly da SHIP!! Hurrah!

"Mystery, I have a request. Would it be possible for you to pay very much attention on the calculation of the error probability?"

Comment: Da perfect friend is being polite but why about such nonsense as "calculation of the error probability?"

"There is a worm in my head, mother do something!", and started to run around in circles.

Comment: I can actually picture this ROFL

I have said it before but I gotta say it again: I LOVE DA STORY!!! Thank you for writing, dear friend! BIG HUG

[Darknight]

Very Nice My Most Perfect Friend. I liked .....It all

[Mistery]

Thank you very much Lilli and Darknight
Lilli, have you read both?
(Working on the next one)

[Lilliputt]

Thank you very much Lilli and Darknight
Lilli, have you read both?
(Working on the next one)

Just read da second, dear friend Here are favorite parts:

Meanwhile there were 4 guards, and the hero decided to spill some oil on the floor.

Comment: Oh, no da worst nightmare for Slurp Spiders: OIL SPILLITIS!

BatCat was standing on a bed of metal, fighting with her claws, her eyes closed, and singing the Alooney Song in a very loud voice. [...] Therefore she raised her voice once more, and fought even more desperately with her claws.

Comment: It is not so easy for a worried mama ta read this (So exciting!)

"My Most Perfect Friend, I need you! I have found BatCat, but I can't stop her fighting! Do something!", but there was no reply.

Comment: OMB!! I can't wait ta read what happened next!

STILL LOOOOOOOOVE da story!! Again, thank you for writing, dear friend

EDIT: Ok so now I have read da latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are favorite parts:

But unfortunately the robot didn't notice anything, and had an enormous speed, so that they collided and fell on the ground.

Comment: Ooops!

"Hmmm, two different coordinates. I seem to have forgotten to note down which one was invalid.[...]

Comment: Doubble ooops!

"Oh, look at the stars on the screen, wow!", Freakshow yelled. "Stars?!?", Zox asked in a shocked voice and glanced at the main screen. What he saw, made him alerted. They had arrived in another galaxy.

Comment: TRIPPLE ooops!

"Where?", asked the group, and Zox answered: "Ummm... well... I have no idea."

Comment: Is Zox going.... DA WRONG WAY???

"Okay, we have two different possibilities. May I ask our decision expert to use her Eenie Meenie technique?", and smiled at Lilliputt, who got very excited.

Comment: Aaaah! My expert opinion is needed

He saw a big group of slurp spiders coming nearer, and quickly jumped on the window sill, cut the spiderweb, and lifted up into the air with the singing and fighting cat on his shoulder.

Comment: And theeeeen?! Me so hooked on this story


STILL THINK DA STORY IS AMAZING and I LOOOOOOVE IT!! Thank you for writing, dear friend

[Mistery]

Thank you

[Lilliputt]

I have again read da latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

OneBun replied her, and told about their difficulties, but also reassured the alien, that thanks to Lilliputt's decision taking method, they finally found the island.

Comment: Really? ...err...I mean OF COURSE!

Murph was determined to beam down and shouted: "I will save BatCat! Let me beam down!"

Comment: My heroic sister

But no matter how she tried, it wasn't possible to locate the bat properly, since he was tumbling too fast through the air.

Comment: He was tumbling too fast through the air?

You cannot come near to meeeeeee
I am worse than a beeeeee
Go away, don't come baaaaack
I will never be your snaaaaack

Comment: This just cracks me up

He took them out, put one of them into BatCats mouth, who immediately stopped singing, and began to eat his tomato.

Comment: Da secret is OUT! Da hero knows how ta silence his wifey

Da story is FANTASTIC!! STIIIILL LOVE IT! Thank you for writing, my dear friend

EDIT: Ok, soooo I again read da latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are favorite parts:

BatCat immediately froze, and hit the tomato out of her mouth.

Comment: She HIT da tomato? Uuuuh...it seems more practical to just SPIT it out.... *Feels confused*

The bat uncovered his head, and asked very surprised: "What are you doing here?!?", and Murph said with a big smile: "I have come to save you!"

Comment: Thaz my sis *Feels proud *

"Auntie Murph!!! I'm sooooo happy to see you!", and Murph hugged her niece with tears in her eyes.

Comment: Aww... thaz so sweet

Finally Freakshow decided to use the Eenie Meenie method on the 4 directions, and to push the warp button after the decision had been taken.

Comment: An act of INTELLIGANCE

I STILL love da story! Thank you for writing dear friend *100xhugs*

[Mistery]

Thank you dear Lilli, I love to read your favorite parts

(Btw, for the hitting the tomato: she was already hitting around with her claws, so... Well, in shock, we act instinctively )

[Lilliputt]

Thank you dear Lilli, I love to read your favorite parts

(Btw, for the hitting the tomato: she was already hitting around with her claws, so... Well, in shock, we act instinctively )

Aww, sweet of ya ta say ya like my comments

Aaaaaaaaah! I think that was a real nice touch, dear alien. From now on I will start ta HIT tomatoes out of my mouth just ta see if I can You da brilliant author, ya know

[SimplyCrazy]

I liked Escape's song Really funny.