A new book

[EscapeGirl]

So eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrie!!! The radio part, and the part where the girl is just sitting there smiling! And her name! Another nice twist!

[Clank]

Thanks LUV and Escape glad you like it again, this was my favourite chapter

[Chocbubbles]

that little girl is CREEEEPY!!! she's always smiling

nice story geordieboy

*sits down and stares at computer screen, not moving until next chapter is up*

[Clank]

Here is chapter 8...

Who is that girl? Why is she smiling?

I paced heavily down the corridor, I was furious.
“Who are you?”
“I’m Ebony and I’m here to kill you”.
“You! But Why?”
“Because I am their leader, I have to lead the phantoms into the light, I am going to rule. And when I do that I shall rule the world, you are the last of them, and I am the beginning of the new. I came to this Earth looking for ways to rule, so I invented the virus, I am Ebony!”
The girl transformed into the man I saw in the reflection. It was Drew Ebony.
“Oh my god”.

I stepped back. Breathing vigorously, I didn’t know what to do, I grabbed the golf club from earlier and started smashing at the man, but it went straight through him, through his black jacket and striped white shirt. I hit him as hard as I could. Swinging the bat with all my might. I had no hope. I was lost. He snatched the golf club off of me and smashed me across the head with it on the base of my skull. I fell to the floor like a pin drifting from a table. He was a phantom.

“You just don’t know where to stop, do you?” he boomed. “You just don’t know when to give up. I want your blood”.

I lay on my side facing the wall, I could hear him, but it was like I was asleep, like I was in a dream. The last thing I heard was the radio and that word ‘phantoms’.

[Clank]

Here is chapter 9...

The next thing I knew I woke up lying on the couch, it was daylight, there weren’t any shutters on the windows, the fire was blazing. I stood up and my feet touched the cold marble flooring. I sped towards the door frantically, opening up I was at the protest, where the man was on the podium speaking. Everyone was shouting- “What about us? What about us?”. I heard an anonymous man in the crowd say- “Why can’t we get the cure, Why?”.

The man on the podium beamed through his microphone:
“All of you must report to the execution docks immediately, you are the immune, you are unlike the rest of us. You must all report to the execution docks immediately. Everyone here will be dead by midnight.”

Everyone in the crowd gasped.
“Drew Ebony you…. You can’t do this, Nooooo!”

So that was it. Drew Ebony wanted to kill everyone and rule the world. Everyone obeyed him, except the immune and I was an immune, so he came back for me.

I sped back in the house.

“Where are you? You…” “You evil piece of …” “Please! Stop.”

I scampered up the stairs and pulled out an injection needle from my wifes medical kit before she passed away. I plunged it into my arm and it sunk into my skin. The blood poured into the nozzle.

“You want this you… then come and get it!”

[Clank]

the next chapter is the final chapter, so if anyone wants me to write a longer second story would you:

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In Chapter 10, you find out how it all ends however if i get some requests i will write a new story.

Also how does everyone think it will end

[Heartofthedark]

I would like to read the final chapter

[Clank]

Thanks Heartofthedark

What did you think of it so far

[Emo234]

@chapter6-The girl is mysterious

@chapter7-Ok now she is friggin crazy nd creepy,nd the radio ooooo chills

@chapter8-ahhhhh that makes sense.I luved this part “I’m Ebony and I’m here to kill you”.
“You! But Why?”
“Because I am their leader, I have to lead the phantoms into the light, I am going to rule.That was my fav part

@chapter9-OMG those poor ppl,he needs to die lol

Ok so this is a really good story,alot like,but then different form I am ledgend which I find very cool/interesting!!!!!!! Keep up the good work

[Clank]

Thanks woahhhhh! Really thanks

will definitely be writing another story but chapter 10 might be on its way today

[Emo234]

OOOOOOO I hope so plz This story is amazing,funny thing is I hate reading,but this is so good I can't stop reading lol,u have me hooked

[Isaiah]

Hey i now have to catch up with 2 books dang!

[Clank]

Heres the final chapter, chapter 10

I ran up the stairs and out of the window where the crowds of people were. I bellowed out.

“He wants our blood!”
“He wants our blood!”.

“Run, if you run he can’t get you”
“You have got to run before he can kill you or we all die”.

Everyone started to gather and after a moment people started running it was working. If they survive then the planet will.

Suddenly the little girl appeared, floating in the doorway.

“You think you can stop me, your wrong. I am Ebony and I am going to kill you and you’re going to die. I am going to kill you and your gonna die”.

She stepped forward with her hands out she grabbed my wrist. I tugged at her. She fell back.

“I will lead the phantoms into the light, I will rule and you will die, I will kill those who stand in my way, remember this”.

I ran forward into her and plunged the syringe into her heart.

“Whaaaa! Nooooo”

She turned into a human.

“Got ya!!!”

[~GH Dog~]

I dont get it

[Emo234]

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