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  • #31
    I have an idea. How about to write for a mystery chest
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    I'm CHOCACHOLIC and I like it and if you don't like it that's fine.More chocolate for me

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    • #32
      A mystery chest?
      and I'm asking that any ideas be fowarded to my pm box.

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      • #33
        I read your new chapter. Very strange things are happening
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        The cute chicken of LooneyBin
        With wonderful younger sisters:Animal Dragon Chocbubbles
        Kids
        Sons: Funja,Isaiah and 2 Tails
        Daughter: Emo234
        Proud member of GFARDTO
        Carrot Explosion Expert
        I'm CHOCACHOLIC and I like it and if you don't like it that's fine.More chocolate for me

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        • #34
          The mystery box

          i just read wot u dun, so far it's rlly good!! Every chapter has a cliff hanger, my fav part so far is in chapter 4 the description and the fight with the creatures is gr8!! when will there be the next chapter??

          mojo xxx
          Last edited by Adventure; 08-09-2008, 18:33:06. Reason: moved post to appropriate thread
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          • #35
            I'm just reminding fans of my stories. I'm thinking of new ideas, but if you think you havwe a really good idea, pm me and I might use it.

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            • #36
              Ok so I am an official fan.I like the gore,nd violence.Rock on.Can't wait for the next chapters,ps I NEVER read anything,but I am excited about this!!!!!!!!!!!
              2~28~10 <3

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              • #37
                You should try reading it.

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                • #38
                  Ok just read chapter 2 of the takeover,nd I wanted to turn the page soooooooo bad,but there is no page t turn lol. I thought it was great!!!!! I was a lil confused in the begining of the chapter,but then I realized what was going on when I read more.So all in all I am really liking this story!!!!!!!!!!!
                  2~28~10 <3

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                  • #39
                    You read chapter 1 too?

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