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I have an idea. How about to write for a mystery chest
sigpic The cute chicken of LooneyBin With wonderful younger sisters:Animal Dragon Chocbubbles
Kids
Sons: Funja,Isaiah and 2 Tails
Daughter: Emo234 Proud member of GFARDTO Carrot Explosion Expert I'm CHOCACHOLIC and I like it and if you don't like it that's fine.More chocolate for me
I read your new chapter. Very strange things are happening
sigpic The cute chicken of LooneyBin With wonderful younger sisters:Animal Dragon Chocbubbles
Kids
Sons: Funja,Isaiah and 2 Tails
Daughter: Emo234 Proud member of GFARDTO Carrot Explosion Expert I'm CHOCACHOLIC and I like it and if you don't like it that's fine.More chocolate for me
i just read wot u dun, so far it's rlly good!! Every chapter has a cliff hanger, my fav part so far is in chapter 4 the description and the fight with the creatures is gr8!! when will there be the next chapter??
mojo xxx
Last edited by Adventure; 08-09-2008, 18:33:06.
Reason: moved post to appropriate thread
Ok so I am an official fan.I like the gore,nd violence.Rock on.Can't wait for the next chapters,ps I NEVER read anything,but I am excited about this!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok just read chapter 2 of the takeover,nd I wanted to turn the page soooooooo bad,but there is no page t turn lol. I thought it was great!!!!! I was a lil confused in the begining of the chapter,but then I realized what was going on when I read more.So all in all I am really liking this story!!!!!!!!!!!
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