Story Reviews

[Mistery]

Thank you very much, Lilli and Sir Theme

[EscapeGirl]

@ Mistery...ROFL ROFL!! I'm not gonna quote right now because mom and Sir Theme did almost the same exact quotes I would have. But the toes!? THE TOES!! OMB!! That had me ROFLing...And, Lilli being attached to Becky's leg... And of course my dear husbun was so concerned, he went to save me because he couldn't wait any longer!! YAY!

LOVE the chapter....I swear these stories are always just getting better and better!

@ Mom and Wolfie....You're story is WONDERFUL. I feel like I am reading a great adventure novel!!! I'm really enjoying it, and am looking forward to more chapters!! (Ahem..Wolfie....) The descriptions you both write makes me feel like I am there....it's amazing. THANK YOU! Keep up the great writing, ladies!! (And, I apologize for taking so long to catch up with reading it.. )

[Lilliputt]

Aww, how sweet Thank you, my dear wonderful daughter!

[SimplyCrazy]

@ Mistery: You straightened up the Zox-thing pretty well in the last chapter Great, Miz

About the newest chapter; this is my fav part:

Crazy was tired of the fox on her head, who got very heavy by all the water in his fur. "Get off my head!", she shouted, but Hyper didn't move. "I'm such an unlucky fox. I'm totally wet, and I'm cold.", he said. Doglover felt reponsible to teach him how to shake himself to get rid of the water, but Crazy wasn't happy that Hyper used her head as classroom, because at every effort to shake himself, water was running down her face. Finally she got very angry, grabbed the unlucky fox, and wanted to toss him into another boat. Her friends tried to hold her back, and at last Hyper landed in the sea.

This must obviously before I learned to deal with Hyper (See 'Crazy's Treasure' chapter 1)

[Lilliputt]

Read da latest chapter on da Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my comments:

Lilliputt was untied again, and she hugged Becky and Murph for protecting her so well against the storm. She felt the urge to give her friends some carrots, but there were no carrots left, and this fact made her a little sad.

Comment: Whaaaa....???!! NO CARROTS!!! OH, NOOO! ()

Doglover felt reponsible to teach him how to shake himself to get rid of the water

Comment: She did?! *Feels proud of daughter* ( )

"Hi parrot, long time no see. But now, please be quiet, I'm on an important secret mission.

Comment: He is tellin' a PARROT he is on a SECRET mission?! Well, there goes da secret LOOOL!!

I STILL LOVE DA STORY!!! Thank you for da new chapter, dear friend

[EscapeGirl]

As always, Mistery.....you wrote yet ANOTHER chapter that made me ROFL here at work. I think maybe you are conspiring with my mother for a ROFL attack while I'm at work. Well, done my friend. LOVED IT!

[Mistery]

Thanks for the nice words Lilli and Escape

(@Lilli, Sorry I haven't caught up with Becky's and your story yet )

[Lilliputt]

Never you mind, dear alien. All in good time

EDIT: I have read the latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

"He is swimming in the wrong direction!"

Comment:You mean the way we usually GO

<<Recipe for Carrot Rum (that tastes good and apparenly makes you fly!)
1/4 White, dry rum
3/4 V8 Splash Tropical, if you have it, if not see, Lili's concoction
1 Teaspoon sugar
1 squeeze of fresh lemon
Mix and enjoy. Drink cold.>>

<<I like the last mix the best to...I think it was the following recipe:
Carrot Juice
Pineapple juice
Carrot Juice
Grenadine
Whiskey
YUM!! >>

Comment:

STILL LOVE DA STORY!! Thank you for writing, dear alien

[EscapeGirl]

Mistery!! Loved the latest Darknight's Challenge chapter! (When DON'T I love your writing!? ) Loved this part:

<<Recipe for Carrot Rum (that tastes good and apparenly makes you fly!)
1/4 White, dry rum
3/4 V8 Splash Tropical, if you have it, if not see, Lili's concoction
1 Teaspoon sugar
1 squeeze of fresh lemon
Mix and enjoy. Drink cold.>>

That was me!! That was my post!!!

<<I like the last mix the best to...I think it was the following recipe:
Carrot Juice
Pineapple juice
Carrot Juice
Grenadine
Whiskey
YUM!! >>

Mi amiga got quoted!!!!!

Wonderful story, my friend, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

[ThemePark]

Different suggestions were declined, when finally Becky called Sir Theme, and whispered something to the robots ears. Sir Theme shook his head vigorously, and seemed to be upset. The wolf whispered: "Please, do it for your little baby brother.", but the robot refused. Becky got angry and declared that there was no point in trying to help such stubborn brothers, and she turned her back on him.

I feel ashamed for having angered my dear friend God

The wolf explained that Hyper had refused any help, and Sir Theme had refused to transform himself into a pot of ramen to save his little brother.

I feel even more ashamed for refusing to help my baby brother

Lilliputt tried to brace herself, but the thought of the robot turning into a pot of ramen made her ROFL on the seat of the boat, where she had been standing. The robot was disappointed and lifted up into the air again, which made the boat move a little, and the Carrot Islander rolled into the water. She sank for a moment, appeared on the surface again, and began to cough. When Sir Theme noticed the impact of his action, he apologized to his friend, and offered to help her out of the sea. Lilliputt looked angrily at the robot, declined with thanks, and started to swim towards Hyper.

I feel terribly ashamed for having caused my dear friend Lilli to fall into the sea However perhaps now she will start speaking alienish logics instead of that silly Lilliputt logics

Just at this moment, a fourth spider jumped towards Darknight, who yelled: "Time for the Hyper Trick!", and he jumped on the head of the spider.

ROFL!

I'm such an unlucky robot

[Lilliputt]

I have read the latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

Sir Theme shook his head vigorously, and seemed to be upset.

Comment: Da robot is goin' JAPANESE

Lilliputt tried to brace herself, but the thought of the robot turning into a pot of ramen made her ROFL on the seat of the boat, where she had been standing.

Comment: That is soooo true

"That's enough! We are on a mission to save our dear friend Escape! And what are you doing?!? Pull yourself together! One for all, and all for one!"

Comment: Thaz my sis a' right *Feels proud*

The silence was broken by Hollandgirl: "Unus pro omnibus, omnes pro uno!"

Comment: I got such a clever daughter!! *Feels proud*

Lili wanted to cheer up the group aswell, and added: "Or in gamershoodish: OneBun for everybunny, and everybunny for OneBun!" The loonies gazed at the lily who blushed: "Ummm.... I mean everybunny for Escape." "Agreed!", her friends shouted

Comment: ROOOOOOOOOOFL!!

Just at this moment, a fourth spider jumped towards Darknight, who yelled: "Time for the Hyper Trick!", and he jumped on the head of the spider.

Comment: "Time for the Hyper Trick!" Thaz funny!

THIS ISLANDER STILL LOVES DA STORY!! Thank you for writing, dear alien

@Sir Theme

[EscapeGirl]

@ Mistery....just read the latest chapter, and I especially loved the part where my husbun tolok care of the Slurp Spider by jumping on his head, and then tying the spider's legs together, and the one getting stuck on the ceiling. ROFL! Love it!! Keep 'em coming!

[Mistery]

Thank you so much Lilli, Sir Theme and Escape

[Lilliputt]

I have read the latest addition to the Darknight story by my favourite alien Mistery. Here are my favorite parts:

"Okay, we'll try it with both methods at the same time, this should wake him up!" Saying that, she told OneBun to hold his mouth open, and dribbled some carrot juice into Zox's mouth.

Comment: Am I being scientific with ICE?!

OneBun smiled at her friend and said: "God morning Zox!", and Zox replied: "God?", and seemed to be even more vonfused.

Comment: It is not so easy to finally stand face to face with God

Two slurp spiders and three worms were discussing about something, but Darknight didn't understand a word.

Comment: Discussing slurp spiders and worms?? I...

Sir Theme shouted back: "My baby brother has hotwired one of the ships!"

Comment: ROOOOOOOOFL!!

"I haven't found any useful data to answer this question." Then he turned to Lilliputt and asked: "Any idea if we could use your Eenie Meenie method in this situation?" The Carrot Islander was not really sure if the robot was only teasing her or asking her for help. But the situation seemed to be very serious, and therefore she didn't want to start an argument, and replied: "Not in this case, I'm afraid."

Comment: Aww, poor sir Theme. I feel bad about this

Zox yelled frantically, and suddenly turned to Lilliputt: "Sing it down! Sing it down!"

Comment: I should SING?? But my partner always turn so PALE when I do that

- Yes sir, our secret agent in the robot's head has reported that they are on the island with the spaceships.

Comment: Da plot THICKENS

STILL LOVE DA STORY!! It really is too great for words!! Thank you for writing, dear alien

[EscapeGirl]

@ Mistery....Ooh!! I'm at the edge of my seat!! This is good!! I love it!!! And I really loved they Hyper spaceship part!! Thank you, dear alien...I can't wait to read more of it!!