Story Reviews

[ShiningStar]

great new chapters Crazy!

[someguy]

My story is close to being accepted or rejected.

[Lilliputt]

The not-so-shining Star

Very funny chapters Hjنrtat!

I liked these especially

"When Lilli was eh... a little tipsy, she became rather scary... She would stagger all over the hotel, not being safe for herself or others." HEY! It's not TRUE, I tell you .... well not much

"And the worst part of all: She was VERY likely to sing!" .... todays youth! No RESPECT! ()

[SimplyCrazy]

I'm glad you like it

[Elni]

Thanks Escape I am glad you'd liked it.

I just have finished reading the not so shinning star story and I find it realy funny so far.

Still I have to read all the other stories written in here and I post my opinion but according to what other loonies said I am going to ROLF really hard

[EscapeGirl]

The making of a Labyrithian

Another great chapter, my dear. I enjoyed all the internet puns, and the purple hell. I really loved how Jenni arrived by Pop Up. Very well written, as usual. Looking forward to another chapter.

[Lilliputt]

Oh! Ahem... why you read such boring stuff? Thank you very much though

[ShiningStar]

Just read your new chapters Lilli and they are great as usual!

[Lilliputt]

Aww... pffft... they is really boring ... but thank you

[Elni]

LOL Crazy I liked your new chapter rolfed of my chair

Lill I loved your story. Really good description and story

[SimplyCrazy]

I'm glad you liked it, Elni

I just read "How Chocolate was really made" for the first time, and it was very nice

[EscapeGirl]

The Making of the Labrynthian

Love it, as always! Loved the jokes about the back button! And the part where you were so angry coming out of the portal! Looking forward to more!!

The Not So Shining Star

Hehe....loved it! I love the description of the star river, and also how you took after you uncle Hyper and slept on Iva's head. I hope you're gonna be okay! Looking forward to more!

[EscapeGirl]

The Making of the Labrynthian

Very well written story. As always, I loved your humor. Of course, it's a bit sad to see Lilliputt no longer be a carrot islander...

But I loved the fact that the htm river can carry messages to her friends on GH Planet. Thank you for writing such an entertaining and funny story.

[Lilliputt]

OH! ... well... it's only a little story I am so happy you liked it, my dear precious daughter

[Elni]

The Making of the Labyrinthia

That was a lovely story Lilliput. How you feel as a Labyrinthia now I wish rivers in real life could do the same. I look forward for your new story dear lill

The not so shinning star

A good end for Shinning Nice story once more Shinning

The Mysterious Ride

Yey a new story by Simply and Escape Me like it so far