Story Reviews

[EscapeGirl]

Pirates of GHP

@Suzy.....Great story!! I can't wait to see what Captain Suzy does with the Kraken attacking the ship!! *feels worried* I can't wait to read more. Great job!

[SuzyE730]

In the end it's not the captain who's the hero!

[EscapeGirl]

@Themolestarted....OMB!! A magic mole! I'd never have figured that out!!!! OMB!! I hope your gonna be okay!!! Another great part of your story! Keep up the great writing, you two!

EDIT: Btw, I liked how themolestarted accidentally played the "girly music" at first.

[Mistery]

Wow, I like the first two chapters of Pirates of GHP. Funny and exciting at the same time! Now I'm really curious to know what happens next

[Themolestarted]

PART 3 DONE yayyyyyyyyy

[SuzyE730]

Me thinks we makes a great team Mole!

[Mistery]

Yay, the mole is saved!!!!

[SuzyE730]

By ME!

[EscapeGirl]

Great story, you two!! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for writing it!!! And I'm glad the mole was saved - and so was the ship!

[Hitman]

I just read it. You guys are so brave. Are you gonna add the panda into the next chapter? I look forward on that my sis. Great work

[SuzyE730]

we're gonna do a next chapter? YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE'RE GONNA DO A NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I tried to add all of the most active crew members on my ship to da story!

[zillah0625]

great work Suzy and MoleI love the story

[Themolestarted]

first we need to think of another story what about the slurp spider king story only edited a bit

[SuzyE730]

that's.....A GREAT IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Themolestarted]

thanks sis