Short Circuit!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

"As soon as they came near, they all piled themselves up against the glass of the front of the glass."

thought i would point that out.

[Justeazy]

*smacks forehead*
Yep, that second one should be "Hospital" thank you!

EDIT: Fixed it!

[LovelyUndeadVam]

welcome.

oh, and this is the other one:
"The finally entered the next to last door in the hall."

that should be "they" right?

[Justeazy]

Yep!
Fixed that one too! Thank you again,

[LovelyUndeadVam]

welcome.

[funja]

is the pre published version finished or will you be adding more

[Justeazy]

NO way, funja!
It is nowhere near finished (like 1/3-1/4 of the way finished)
I have decided I am not going to post more until I finish each section (each characters story) and only post the 'limited' endings too.

Thanks for your enthuisasm tho, and the first one (Sharell Irngstein) should be finished shortly (relatively)

[funja]

yay whoo lol i got left hanging wiht the charecters and i was liek i want to know what happens
lol so yay whoooooo




:

[1momomo124]

just read the first chapter/person and i think it's great! going to rad the next one tommorow(need to go to sleep )

[Justeazy]

Thanks again funja, and thank you momo, I'll go add you to that post thingy...

[Justeazy]

UPDATE: I'm just about finished with some of it!
(now that summer has come around, I've finally gotten some free time)

If you check the site, the pages are password protected as an additional security measure. You only need to register with me to view them (for now) but it is used so I can track who uses (and abuses) my story. Registration is free, quick, and easy, and one registration works for all five password protected pages.

[funja]

whooo finaly ill sign up late

going through really fast revising my memory and found this under julia stapletons ......

"Mry. Stapleton," he repeated "how are you feeling?"
shouldnt that be Mrs.

[Justeazy]

Yes funja, thanks much!

I am currently going through all of the characters' stories and I hadn't gotten there yet (you posted that when I was 2 paragraphs away, )
Good Catch.
I am changing everything I think needs it. I will update with changes (not counting spelling/grammar/etc.) as soon as I am done.

[funja]

so when do you think the new chapters would be out

[Justeazy]

Soon. I've almost got Sharell's to the point of releasing more (about 7 chapters now) I'm just going to do them one at a time at this point.
...so probably by the end of next week.