Can you translate this?

[DoctorBocaj]

Ok guys, I'm back. You've had some hard ones!

[doglover]

Wow...I did it...

Here's my sentence, it's a part of a poem.

«Se vim ao mundo, foi
só para desflorar florestas virgens,
e desenhar os meus próprios pés na areia inexplorada!
O mais que faço não vale nada.»

I hope it's not to hard...

[DoctorBocaj]

Translator gave me:If I came to the world, it was alone to deflorate blank forests, and
to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand! More than I make not
valley nothing. Which doesnt make much sense. Sadly I dont have any ideas to correct it

[Lilliputt]

Ok, dear daughter. This is what da translator gave me.
"If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower pure forests,
and to draw my feet themselves in the unexplored sand!
More what I do does not cost anything."

Gimme a sec.... It seems poetic, ya know...

[doglover]

@Doctor
The first part is correct; second one isn't very correct but I'll check it on the dictionary...; third part has one or two wrong words; fourth part doesn't make much sence, you just have to change some expressions...

@Mom aka Lilli
You're almost there! You just have to change a word on the third part, and change some expressions on the last one.

[DoctorBocaj]

Hmmmm....I think lilliputt probably did better, because hers definently makes more sense and sounds much more poetic. Maybe?:If I came to the world, it was only to deflower pure forests, and
to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand! More of what I do does not cost anything?

[kyle6baseball]

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower pure forests,
and to draw my feet in the unexplored sand!
but more what I do does not mean anything.

[Acelightning]

is this right?

"If I came to the world, it was to only deflorate virgin forests, and to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand! Anything lives of what I donate not cost to it"

[Lilliputt]

"If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower untouched forests,
and to draw my own feet in the unexplored sand!
Morever do anything of value."

(My hair has turned all white! )

[Acelightning]

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower untouched forests,
and to draw my own feet in the unexplored sand! Anything lives of what I donate not cost to it

[DoctorBocaj]

If I came to the world, it was only to deflower untouched forests, and
to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand! More of what I do donate does not cost anyone anything?
If I came to the world, it was only to deflower untouched forests, and
to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand! But more of what I do does not mean anything?
I'm just trying to make sense out of it.

[doglover]

Hmmmm....I think lilliputt probably did better, because hers definently makes more sense and sounds much more poetic. Maybe?:
If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower pure forests,
and to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand!
More of what I do does not cost anything?

2nd part: There's a better word that you could use there...
3rd part: (same as above)
4th part: It's not quite the meaning of it... Think about values and not in costs

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower pure forests,
and to draw my feet in the unexplored sand!
but more what I do does not mean anything.

2nd part: (same thing I told DoctorBocaj)
3rd part: There's a word missing
4th part: It's very close

is this right?

"If I came to the world, it was
to only deflorate virgin forests,
and to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand!
Anything lives of what I donate not cost to it"

3rd part: You could use a better word there
4th part: It doesn't make sense

"If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower untouched forests,
and to draw my own feet in the unexplored sand!
Morever do anything of value."

(My hair has turned all white! )

2nd part: Someone used another word that is more correct
With 'morever' you mean 'moreover', right?

(OMG, my mom turned my grandma!!! )

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower untouched forests,
and to draw my own feet in the unexplored sand!
Anything lives of what I donate not cost to it

2nd part: The other word was more correct...
4th part: Sorry, it doesn't make any sense

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower untouched forests, and
to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand!
More of what I do donate does not cost anyone anything?

2nd part: Again, another word could be used...
3rd part: (same as above)
4th part: It's not exactly that...

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower untouched forests, and
to draw my proper feet in the unexplored sand!
But more of what I do does not mean anything?
I'm just trying to make sense out of it.

2nd and 3rd parts: (the same I said above)
4th part: It makes more sense now


Till now I think Lilli aka Mom was the best translation...though, it's not completly correct

[Lilliputt]

But I posted 2 suggestions... Me vonfused

(Morever= more ever)

[doglover]

When I said your translation was the best one till now, I meant the second one

[Lilliputt]

You did? YAY! *Feels proud* Thanx, dear daughter!
Here is my third WIIIILD guess

If I came to the world, it was
only to deflower virgin forests,
and to draw my own feet in the unexplored sand!
Morever to do anything of value."